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Very, Very Interesting . . .
Is this the start of something or just a plot bunny that needed to be written down, Kishin?
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Korby
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Wow! Had a bit of inspiration suddenly, did we? 
Good to see you back at the writing, Kishin--it's been a while!
I guess we're seeing something of a prequel/reboot/reimagining of Nova's saga here... quite interesting! A nicely done piece, I must say. Depth of plot and character abounds here. As I have noticed in your past work, there's not only a layer of your basic erotic fembot titillation but also an interesting SF/action piece--making it an interesting read on both levels.
I'm all too aware that virtually all my writing in this arena has been strictly on the former level and not at all on the latter; not too put too fine a point on it, but your stuff makes me think that I'm not really making any kind of serious effort as a writer to do something new and better! But then again, with the kind of stuff I've written here, there's really just one particular aim in mind--strictly to do some fembot stuff that I find erotically engaging. Really trying to write stuff that has its own inherent merits beyond the sexual fantasy level has not been my intention.
Your work--and this piece in particular--is a success all around. The fact that it makes me seriously consider the literary shortcomings of my own efforts is probably about the highest praise I can muster.
Very nicely done, and I look forward to seeing more!
Good to see you back at the writing, Kishin--it's been a while!I guess we're seeing something of a prequel/reboot/reimagining of Nova's saga here... quite interesting! A nicely done piece, I must say. Depth of plot and character abounds here. As I have noticed in your past work, there's not only a layer of your basic erotic fembot titillation but also an interesting SF/action piece--making it an interesting read on both levels.
I'm all too aware that virtually all my writing in this arena has been strictly on the former level and not at all on the latter; not too put too fine a point on it, but your stuff makes me think that I'm not really making any kind of serious effort as a writer to do something new and better! But then again, with the kind of stuff I've written here, there's really just one particular aim in mind--strictly to do some fembot stuff that I find erotically engaging. Really trying to write stuff that has its own inherent merits beyond the sexual fantasy level has not been my intention.
Your work--and this piece in particular--is a success all around. The fact that it makes me seriously consider the literary shortcomings of my own efforts is probably about the highest praise I can muster.
Very nicely done, and I look forward to seeing more!
"Oh shut up Ray don't talk about gettin' with a robot
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That is a ill idea"
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Oh, man! And here for some foolish reason I was thinking this couldn't get much better. Well, I stand corrected. 
"Oh shut up Ray don't talk about gettin' with a robot
That is a ill idea"
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That is a ill idea"
--Roast Beef
http://achewood.com
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Re: Blimey...
I was thinking much the same. It struck me how evocative this was of modern science fiction/action films such as The Matrix or Ultraviolet, that sort of thing.BA2 wrote:Absolutely brilliant! Hat well and truely doffed - superb writing, great concept. Sexy, dark, pacy, stylish; I'd love to see the movie...
BA
Good stuff, Kishin!
"Oh shut up Ray don't talk about gettin' with a robot
That is a ill idea"
--Roast Beef
http://achewood.com
That is a ill idea"
--Roast Beef
http://achewood.com
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SHE's BAAAACKKKK!!!!!!! HEHEHE
SHE'S BAAAACK HEHEHE 
CAN it be?? After all these years?? OUR Firey favorite SEXY Andoid is BACK!!!!! Kishin my ol friend, PURE F'IN' AWESOME Just as good if NOT BETTER than your ol' stuff, & YOU of all know how much I love you ol stuff BUB!!! Great to see Nova back & you even more!!! WelCome BUB!! *Lites My cigar* Good to see yeah again! Again Kishin AWESOME!!! Freakin AWESOME!!!! Your ol' PAL PETE#69/ANDROID69
CAN it be?? After all these years?? OUR Firey favorite SEXY Andoid is BACK!!!!! Kishin my ol friend, PURE F'IN' AWESOME Just as good if NOT BETTER than your ol' stuff, & YOU of all know how much I love you ol stuff BUB!!! Great to see Nova back & you even more!!! WelCome BUB!! *Lites My cigar* Good to see yeah again! Again Kishin AWESOME!!! Freakin AWESOME!!!! Your ol' PAL PETE#69/ANDROID69
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Dam,n typos
Thats WELCOME HOME!!! BUB GRRRRR Sorry for the typo!!
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GREAT ACTION STORY
This is one of the BEST action-based android stories I have ever read.Keep it coming!!! (PLEASE)
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Ah, nice. I'd been wondering if Robin was going to turn up in the 'Ultimate Nova' universe. 
Always had a certain fondness for her.
Dude, this is great stuff. You are so on a roll. Keep doing what you're doing!
Always had a certain fondness for her.Dude, this is great stuff. You are so on a roll. Keep doing what you're doing!
"Oh shut up Ray don't talk about gettin' with a robot
That is a ill idea"
--Roast Beef
http://achewood.com
That is a ill idea"
--Roast Beef
http://achewood.com
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Otaru Mamiya
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Hehe... Hard to speculate when we're so anxious to see what happens next. I'd imagine that even you'd have trouble getting out of this one.
As for speculations... hmmm... I'd predict a tough fight... overcoming lots of virus created malfunctions to make a narrow escape.
As for speculations... hmmm... I'd predict a tough fight... overcoming lots of virus created malfunctions to make a narrow escape.
"Don't sweat the petty things... don't pet the sweaty things..."