Share your fembot fiction and fantasies here or discuss the craft of writing by asking for or giving suggestions.
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by DollSpace » Tue Jun 22, 2004 3:49 pm
Great story ^^ Keep up the good work

Can't wait to read more!
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by ehy » Tue Jun 22, 2004 5:22 pm
Very nice! Good story, and easy to read too. Spelling, grammar, and paragraph breaks go a long way toward making it easy to just enjoy a good tale.
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by sparty » Tue Jun 22, 2004 11:28 pm
Dude A+.
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by kareld » Wed Jun 23, 2004 4:19 am
Wow!!
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by tectile » Wed Jun 23, 2004 6:09 am
Wowzers! What a great story.
My spelling and gramer skills leave alot to be desired and I gues people who live in glass houses etc, but I agree strongly with EHY. Proper spelling, punctuation, etc, sure make it much more fun to read a story.
Aspiring writers please take note.

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by dalejr38 » Wed Jun 23, 2004 7:56 am
Very good story, keep it up.
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by j7569go » Wed Jun 23, 2004 11:42 am
very good story hope there will still be a part 4

,keep it coming
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by botfriend2000 » Wed Jul 14, 2004 8:31 pm

Wanted to let you know that this is a great story! Also when might we expect more.......we all have great patience for the many talented writers in our group. But was wondering if there is light on the horizon?
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