Welcome Surprise, Part 3

DollSpace · Post by **DollSpace** » Tue Jun 22, 2004 3:49 pm

Great story ^^ Keep up the good work

Can't wait to read more!

Ryn

ehy · Post by **ehy** » Tue Jun 22, 2004 5:22 pm

Very nice! Good story, and easy to read too. Spelling, grammar, and paragraph breaks go a long way toward making it easy to just enjoy a good tale.

sparty · Post by **sparty** » Tue Jun 22, 2004 11:28 pm

Dude A+.

kareld · Post by **kareld** » Wed Jun 23, 2004 4:19 am

Wow!!

tectile · Post by **tectile** » Wed Jun 23, 2004 6:09 am

Wowzers! What a great story.

My spelling and gramer skills leave alot to be desired and I gues people who live in glass houses etc, but I agree strongly with EHY. Proper spelling, punctuation, etc, sure make it much more fun to read a story.

Aspiring writers please take note.

dalejr38 · Post by **dalejr38** » Wed Jun 23, 2004 7:56 am

Very good story, keep it up.

j7569go · Post by **j7569go** » Wed Jun 23, 2004 11:42 am

very good story hope there will still be a part 4

,keep it coming

botfriend2000 · Post by **botfriend2000** » Wed Jul 14, 2004 8:31 pm

Wanted to let you know that this is a great story! Also when might we expect more.......we all have great patience for the many talented writers in our group. But was wondering if there is light on the horizon?