Bad Romance - Part 4 (comic)

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Bad Romance - Part 4 (comic)

Post by The Liar » Thu Jun 06, 2019 2:55 pm

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Re: Bad Romance - Part 4 (comic)

Post by Gorgo » Thu Jun 06, 2019 4:48 pm

Oh, man, that girl's got it bad...! :lol:
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Re: Bad Romance - Part 4 (comic)

Post by Chemik » Fri Jun 07, 2019 5:46 am

A great one! Wonder where it goes from here. I hope Krysia's friend is also of Krysia's nature. Oh, by the way "Krysia" is a Polish diminutive for "Krystyna" (Christine).
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Re: Bad Romance - Part 4 (comic)

Post by dingdongdug » Fri Jun 07, 2019 11:27 am

more and more interesting
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Re: Bad Romance - Part 4 (comic)

Post by ChocolateKeys » Fri Jun 07, 2019 3:14 pm

I found heartwarming the reveal scene, good job!
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Re: Bad Romance - Part 4 (comic)

Post by The Liar » Sat Jun 08, 2019 3:51 am

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