Work in progress: Deactivated Catgirl Gynoid

[gynoneko]

So I started working on a new drawing, and it is still in the early stages, hoping to get feedback as I go along. This is only a sketch (so please don't post it to the wiki yet). My goal here is to make 2 or 3 pictures of fembot catgirls which I can use as an icon that will be my own work and not someone else's. This is the first idea, the second is a gynoid repairing herself, and the third is one being repaired while playing games or ignoring her owner/technician. This is just one laying down with a port open and her arm missing (right now elbow down). Let me know what you think, I'll post here with regular updates.

[gynoneko]

And an update with rough lines and rough colors...

[D.Olivaw]

Looks good so far. You picked a tough angle to depict her from.

[gynoneko]

Thanks. Yeah, I wanted to get a dynamic angle of her laying down, so here she is laying down on a table or workbench, but I always do the backgrounds later and start with the subject first. I have a perspective grid I can use when I get down to it that should help with the angles, but doing interesting camera angles like this is fun.
What do you all think about the hair color? I was going to do a shape of blue for this one, red for another, and brown for the last. I can always change the hair color later though. Doing this all on my phone is a little challenging and takes a little more time cause I am constantly zooming in and out and change brush sizes and going in and out of the layers... can't wait to get a larger tablet to work on. I plan to keep using my phone to draw when I don't have my tablet, but I really want to get the ability to add a ton of detail and control that a tablet and stylus will bring. Till then, I'll keep chugging on with these phone drawings.

This is still just a rough sketch, I plan to go through and redo all the lines, and then clean them up while doing her robotic seams on a different layer. After the lines are reworked I will work on the finer details and then redoing the base color. After the base color is in, I will start adding light sources to get highlights and shadows and blending them in. Once I am satisfied, I will add clothing. I'm thinking either a bikini, a bra, or a see-through spaghetti strap top. I am debating what her insides will look like and if I want to keep her stomach or have her cut off and exposed there too like on her arm.

[D.Olivaw]

I don't have strong preferences about hair color; they each have their own charm. That said, unnatural colors like blue or purple do work well in ASFR because they highlight the character's artificial nature.

[Toastdroid]

Anatomy and angle look pretty solid to me, so I can't really give much other than minor things. Lookin' good so far.

I'm not sure if hairlines are that close to the facial features, but then I don't know what hairstyle you're going for so that might not be the hairline.

If that's a seam you've got running along her side it should probably curve the other way when it hits the ribs, right now it makes the sides of them look kinda flat.

I figure you could probably add more definition along the center of the ribs and stomach, but that's probably more a stylistic choice and you might be leaving that for shading rather than inks anyway.

[gynoneko]

Got a new iPad with the pencil, been practicing with it. Decided to start over on this image. I think it has gone pretty well so far. Still has a lot more to go. Any feedback?

[gynoneko]

For some new updates, almost done. Just wondering with or without the makeup... opinions?

[The Liar]

For some new updates, almost done. Just wondering with or without the makeup... opinions?

You failed to properly link the images.

[gynoneko]

Let's try again....

This is almost done, just need as much feedback as you guys are willing to give...





I'll post the final versions in a little once I make a few tweaks and get any feedback.

[The Liar]

Makeup one looks better.

[gynoneko]

There are a few more changes to come, but here is a nude version that should better show the lines, let me know what you think and if they look fine this way or not...