Faust 2.0 Part 1 (comic)

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Faust 2.0 Part 1 (comic)

Post by The Liar » Tue Jun 26, 2018 8:37 am

The next couple chapters of Progenitors and Progeny might be a bit vanilla, so I thought I might I'd intersperse this 2 parter, between them.

http://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=Faust_2.0

I wonder about the structure, it meanders a bit, and I think the literary allusion may have gotten a little lost somewhere.
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Re: Faust 2.0 Part 1 (comic)

Post by liliwinnt6 » Wed Jun 27, 2018 5:29 pm

can't wait to see how the story goes
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Re: Faust 2.0 Part 1 (comic)

Post by liliwinnt6 » Wed Jun 27, 2018 5:30 pm

i'm sorry but i can't say the scripts of Herta are easy for me to read, maybe you can try different fonts,
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Re: Faust 2.0 Part 1 (comic)

Post by JohnFabar4 » Wed Jun 27, 2018 8:42 pm

Like the premise.

Curious at how it will develop. keep up the great work!
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