So, I thought that when I'll eventually get through with the main story of The Revolution, I'll start creating prequels (comic-backstories) of each character.
So I would like to ask you guys and gals which character you would like to see a backstory of first.
I'll probably redo this poll once I've expanded the character-roster.
If I ever do the backstories, I'll (obviously) start with the most popular vote, working my way down to the least popular.
Poll: The Revolution - Possible Backstories / Prequels
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I have a lot of sympathy for the Siren (am sad she's gone, may do a spin-off where she wins if you don't object), so that's my vote for sure.
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Will you show the factory where Ashley was manufactured??
English isn't my first language (and still isn't a second...). So, if i commit some mistake, PLEASE inform me.
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Re: Poll: The Revolution - Possible Backstories / Prequels
Ch. 14:
Page 60
Nyssa, please bring Chell to her prison-cell.
suggestion:
swap "bring" with "escort"
Page 61
Keep moving.
suggestion:
say "Get moving." instead of "Keep moving."
Page 60
Nyssa, please bring Chell to her prison-cell.
suggestion:
swap "bring" with "escort"
Page 61
Keep moving.
suggestion:
say "Get moving." instead of "Keep moving."
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Re: Poll: The Revolution - Possible Backstories / Prequels
im interested that how would the real Chell going to be in the future story
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Quick Writing Adviceliliwinnt6 wrote:Ch. 14:
Page 60
Nyssa, please bring Chell to her prison-cell.
suggestion:
swap "bring" with "escort"
Page 61
Keep moving.
suggestion:
say "Get moving." instead of "Keep moving."
Dialogue gets a free pass on issues of grammar, as in real life, people often speak in less formal and more grammatically incorrect ways, such as in the use of slang or local dialect. Attempting to make dialogue grammatically correct 100% of the time makes it read as stilted and (dare it be said) robotic.
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its*Uncom wrote: it‘s
"If the time should ever come when what is now called science, thus familiarized to men, shall be ready to put on, as it were, a form of flesh and blood, the Poet will lend his divine spirit to aid the transfiguration, and will welcome the Being thus produced, as a dear and genuine inmate of the household of man."
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well, no offense i just wish to have it sound right
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