Little Things: finale (comic)

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Little Things: finale (comic)

Post by The Liar » Tue May 29, 2018 5:17 pm

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Post by The Liar » Tue May 29, 2018 5:46 pm

Kishin wrote:Awww. I was loving it too! Well hopefully it won't be the last comic you do. Thank you! :faceoff:
Well, I had a epilogue planned, but I'm not 100% sure how well it would synch with the finished product, at best I think it would be kinda vestigial (would have been entirely Lori and Tillie musing philosophically about their nature.)

I had an idea of a series of stories set in bluegate, in which Tillie and Lori would show up in, and sequel of a sort.
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Re: Little Things: finale (comic)

Post by zerodin » Tue May 29, 2018 8:32 pm

Very good. I like how there was emphasis on the A in A.I. She wasn't really thinking, just running a very complex program. So complex that she was still a sleeper, even once her nature was exposed to her.
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Re: Little Things: finale (comic)

Post by SunshineInTheGarden » Wed May 30, 2018 1:47 am

Can't wait for more!
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Re: Little Things: finale (comic)

Post by liliwinnt6 » Wed May 30, 2018 8:50 am

nice work of that neck device
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