The Chimes of Midnight (Comic... Kinda) (Revised... again))

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The Chimes of Midnight (Comic... Kinda) (Revised... again))

Post by The Liar » Wed Jun 14, 2017 5:25 pm

Had initially planned on adding text, but the dialog wasn't coming that easily to me, so I thought I'd try for purely visual story telling. Please, tell me if you think it works or not.

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Re: The Chimes of Midnight (Comic... Kinda) (Revised... agai

Post by liliwinnt6 » Thu Jun 15, 2017 10:35 pm

what about letting her have a happy face when loading happybirthday.exe?
what about clenching her teeth when reconfiguring the system?
what about rolling her eyes when extracting genetic data?
what about both clenching her teeth and rolling her eyes when imprinting genetic data?
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Re: The Chimes of Midnight (Comic... Kinda) (Revised... agai

Post by liliwinnt6 » Fri Jun 16, 2017 7:05 am

so far so good, thanks.
what about having her eyes a little more tiny?
what about rolling her eyes in different ways?
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Re: The Chimes of Midnight (Comic... Kinda) (Revised... agai

Post by The Liar » Fri Jun 16, 2017 7:22 am

liliwinnt6 wrote:so far so good, thanks.
what about having her eyes a little more tiny?
what about rolling her eyes in different ways?
Could you elaborate.
Tiny at what points?
Eyes roll differently how?
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Re: The Chimes of Midnight (Comic... Kinda) (Revised... agai

Post by liliwinnt6 » Sat Jun 17, 2017 3:23 am

eyes could be a little too big, both iris and eye pit;

roll eyes sample:
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