Story outline?

[Deep Blue]

I would like to write a story about the fembots exchanging parts. What outline and background I should write. I don't have good idea. Anyone have that? Thanks!

[dale coba]

How about you duplicate a fembot that claims to be unique,
then you disassemble them both, swapping half the parts?

After that, I think she would stop proclaiming how unique she is.

Is it cruel? No.
Is it humbling? Yes.
She has to know her place; as an object x 2, by her master's sides.

- Dale Coba

[Deep Blue]

Some women have a young face and mature body, or mature face and young body. So I have this idea.

[--NightBattery--]

what is the motivation for exchanging parts?

what could work so you have a story where the head of a mature woman is on the body of a young woman and vice versa?

they do it? one of them forces the other? a third character do this for his/her own amusement? are they family? lesbian lovers?

it could be a bedroom story of body swapping.

maybe they are lovers.

maybe one of the characters is normally dominated and wants to show the other how it feels...

maybe one is malfunctioning with little chances of further repair

maybe they are machines from two distinct manufacturers and they are trying to show who is better.

maybe you could use your miss chan and a student girl that wants to force her body to do things?.

hope this helps.

[dale coba]

To be specific, my version with transformation.
Innate, insatiable fembot lust shines through when the illusion of her human personality is shattered.

subject: The Shell Game
Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 10:46 pm

Take a human female subject (willing or not), and process her with nanites, creating a synthetic, programmed rendition of her former self.

The nanites gather all the information needed to assemble a replica of her, using factory components already in stock.

Before booting up, the pair are supplied with data, as if each had been present at the other's (re)creation;
and
their components are exchanged, half of all of the tiniest pieces going to the other unit.

Now, upon boot-up, who's who?
Are they one mind in wi-fi harmony?
Are they confused; in competition; in denial?

If Human is [more real/superior] to Fembot,
is Converted of a higher status than Built?
and what has all this manipulation done to the twins' "self"?

Follow the Queen, keep watching closely...
Q: Okay, where did she go? In here? or over here?
A: She's disappeared, tossed surreptitiously under the table, no longer in play.

Which is why I've dubbed this maneuver,
The Shell Game.

- Dale Coba

[gynoneko]

Perhaps there should be some kind of technical aspect as well? Maybe they are modular, so they are designed to be able to swap parts or replace damaged limbs easily and cheaply.
Come up with a reason WHY they should be able to change parts. Maybe they are military androids that were decommissioned or only prototypes never deployed. Maybe they are cheap models, or just part of a new fad of easily modded androids.
Then come up with the character(s). Is she a sleeper? Is she funny? Horny? Prone to errors? Clumsy? Broken? Think of a personality, and make it realistic to her character. If she is suppose to seem human, make her complicated with a complex background and opinions and the like. If she is supposed to be a simple maid bot or something, perhaps her programming is all she can think about. Maybe she is happy doing mindless tasks. Or maybe she has no emotions at all, but swapping parts could awaken something in her.
Finally come up with a conflict. Does the main character know she is an android? Does she get broken and need to repair/replace part of her. Is she curious about a new android she found and wanted to just play around? If the part she swaps out infected with a virus? Does she add a new limb she didn't have before (i.e. a tail, penis, etc.).

Just play around. As for writing an outline, don't kill yourself over it. There are many different writing styles. One is to write outlines relentlessly until everything is figured out and perfect. However it is a flawed method. The other is to ad lib the entire thing, also flawed. The best I found (personally), is to have an outline you want to follow, but keep it open to change, and allow the characters and interactions and events to change the story. Don't be afraid to deviate from the outline, but also be sure to adjust the outline or redirect the story back to place if you have to.
Bottom line, have fun with it. Try different styles and see what works best for you.

I try to make my stories character driven, so I develop their personalities first with personality profiles, and then the events of the story second. I allow the characters to change the story and adjust it as I see fit. And I like to leave the ending ambiguous so I can figure it out as I go.
For example, Piper (in Simulating Wilderness) is a fun-loving girl, who loves to feel good. She loves sex, punk rock, pizza, and likes to wear leather and denim. She is rebellious, but loyal to her friends as much as she can manage. She has flaws, like her impulsiveness, her addiction to sex, her short temper, among other things. She would do anything for her closest friends, even when she disagrees with them. Her past includes some trauma, when she was betrayed by someone she trusted. I won't go into more details but I even came up with outfits she'd wear, bands she likes, hair style, and even found pictures of what she might look like.
There isn't much of a plot in that story, but in Corrupted, I had the main characters figured out, but as the story developed, more characters came in, more development was needed, and I ended up changing direction several times. I brought the plot back to the original path I wanted, and have been piecing together the end. I have it about 80% figured out, but right now I have to let the characters react to the events before I can figure out the rest.

Hope that helps.
As for my personal opinion, I would love to see a story with a gynoid that has to exchange parts after a battle or something with a deactivated gynoid, and when she does snippets of the other girl's life flash into her memory. Might be fun to play with.

[fembotfan]

How about two sorority sisters in college that have both undergone robotic conversions, are switching components before going out on a date.
Sister A: has a Very natural synthetic vagina, no bells and whistles, right down to the natural tasting saline lubricant.
Sister B: Has a top of the line synthetic vagina, built in orgasm buttons, a vibrating function, increased suction, tastes like ???

Sister B is dating a fellow that does not know that she is robotic, and she plans on having sex with him, but is not ready to tell him her true nature. She asks Sister A if she can borrow her hardware for a few days.

Sister A: wants to try out Sister B's expensive unit that she could never afford, so she agrees.

Possible outcome... Sister A does not have the correct drivers, and the new unit overloads her systems mid coitus, surprising her boy friend.


I have a few other ideas if you want to hear them.

[Deep Blue]

How about two sorority sisters in college that have both undergone robotic conversions, are switching components before going out on a date.
Sister A: has a Very natural synthetic vagina, no bells and whistles, right down to the natural tasting saline lubricant.
Sister B: Has a top of the line synthetic vagina, built in orgasm buttons, a vibrating function, increased suction, tastes like ???

Sister B is dating a fellow that does not know that she is robotic, and she plans on having sex with him, but is not ready to tell him her true nature. She asks Sister A if she can borrow her hardware for a few days.

Sister A: wants to try out Sister B's expensive unit that she could never afford, so she agrees.

Possible outcome... Sister A does not have the correct drivers, and the new unit overloads her systems mid coitus, surprising her boy friend.


I have a few other ideas if you want to hear them.

I'm more aim that the obvious changes like exchange legs, hands.

[Deep Blue]

The several bots go to a fight , they cooperated and combined the limbs and parts, like Power Rangers. What do you think?

[darkbutflashy]

You have to create well thought-out text for each transformation so the reader can imagine it in his mind. If done right, this can be extremly sexy, especially for the transformation fans, but doing so will produce a pile of text so your actual story content has to be very very small.

Imagine a Dragonball episode in which all they do is accumulating energy.