Battery's Robot shop

[darkbutflashy]

Uh, oh. Poor dolls!

[Chen]

Oh, I am going to cry...

I can't believe that here are some one who remembers me and my works. However, today I see an artwork which my characters are there.

Really thank you so much, Mr. Battery You made my day!

[--NightBattery--]

-he he heh.

No Chen, thank you for your hard work.

you deserve all the praise, i've seen your stuff even before i knew how to use microsoft paint.

I had to show my appreciation the only way i knew how.

[linzhang77]

I would have to say, I love your work :>

[--NightBattery--]

then i have not drawn in vain!

If you ever want something* drawn, feel free to ask.
Wait...
he meant chen don't he?
*applies only to ASFR

[Chen]

Wow, you may take request? Hey man, that's great! XD
Would you like to draw Koshi or Manami?

Koshi:
http://www.fembotcentral.net/viewtopic. ... =60#p61246

Manami:
http://www.fembotcentral.net/viewtopic. ... =50#p60892

[--NightBattery--]

. _ .

Of course!

[FaceoffFembot]

[Chen]

Thank you Battery!

[zerodin]

Your stuff's getting better, Battery! The necks seem a bit long, but maybe that's just your style.

[--NightBattery--]

Thank you!
i'll keep trying.
Well, what can i say?
i Looove swan necked ladies with long bony arms, heheh.
So flippin' sexy, the longer the better.

[--NightBattery--]

I went to a gym and made Dumbbell Rows.
who cares i know.
But when i finished i noticed the work bench was marked like this:

and then i thought,
"three disembodied body parts, a number three!, perfect to create the minor arcana for a fembot central theme Tarot deck"
using the head, the torso, the arms, legs, feet, and so forth to mark the numbers, using 4 phenotypes for each minor arcana and maybe avatars of veteran members who want to play for the major arcana.
what you think, is the last a bad idea?
you have no idea what i'm talking about right?
It's just a little day dreaming i had.

Hmmm..
yep. bad idea i guess.
i get exalted so easily, heheh...

[--NightBattery--]

Hello, I’m Battery, prince of Eternia. Fabulous secret powers were revealed to me the moment i downloaded mangastudio from piratebay.
But story writing/boarding was not one of those.

I want to make all short of comics related to what we are here for: Robot porn.
and good porn is not only fucking and bad angles, if it makes sense you enjoy it much more, and probably even remember it later, a feat.
But i don't have any experience and i need a little push to consolidate things in my mind.
so look at this:

For a first project I would like to make a 30 something pages comic centered in the "BUILD" theme, with a lot of "DAMAGE" and "DESTRUCTION" in the process;
I was thinking: a middle classed guy (in the future that looks a lot like the present with robots that do stupid things like the trash service) that builds a very basic robot, and slowly gets more pieces getting a better, sexier, sluttier looking fembot.
Many of the pieces are going to be second hand, dissimilar, incomplete and incompatible producing a barely working robot girl that gets fucked in the two senses, malfunctioning constantly during the story.
being her "mind" the only things that lasts...for a while, before it fries, perhaps at a crucial moment, like when she starts showing care for him and he needs to get a new brain for her now too.


i think it would be cool if the appearance of the robot character changes drastically during her upgrading and downgrading as pieces blow up or melt, even her face.

i believe that it is probable that she rarely get out of the guy's house and she is not very smart, at the beginning.
That could change, I don't know, it could be the other way around, she being very sociable, i need ideas you see, i need to develop a setting, my first thought was that she doesn't get out a lot because she is a sex machine and she looks incomplete, like bad shoes, and it is likely the guy is a normal person, perhaps not very sociable, but that could change, i need ideas for the personalities of the characters, maybe he has a friend helping him build the girl?, maybe the friend has a robot girl of his own, maybe they are a pair of lonely nerds? Maybe the guy fucks his friend's girl when he is not around? But then what?
How could I end this?
What could be the climax?
If the guy is not rich (reason he doesn't just buy a pre made fembot) how he gets to the most expensive part of the upgrading, that would be human like appearance?
What other characters could appear?

I’m stuck.

If any one feels like giving me ideas i am all ears...eyes, whatever.

If not, I’ll carry on.


Here is my equivalent of story draft, nothing is final.


Regards.

[darkbutflashy]

Many of the pieces are going to be second hand, dissimilar, incomplete and incompatible producing a barely working robot girl that gets fucked in the two senses, malfunctioning constantly during the story.

Gotta think of playing this.

melt, even her face.

The power of god at work.

i believe that it is probable that she rarely get out of the guy's house and she is not very smart, at the beginning.
That could change, I don't know, it could be the other way around, she being very sociable, i need ideas you see, i need to develop a setting, my first thought was that she doesn't get out a lot because she is a sex machine and she looks incomplete, like bad shoes, and it is likely the guy is a normal person, perhaps not very sociable, but that could change, i need ideas for the personalities of the characters, maybe he has a friend helping him build the girl?, maybe the friend has a robot girl of his own, maybe they are a pair of lonely nerds? Maybe the guy fucks his friend's girl when he is not around? But then what?

How could I end this?
What could be the climax?
If the guy is not rich (reason he doesn't just buy a pre made fembot) how he gets to the most expensive part of the upgrading, that would be human like appearance?
What other characters could appear?

But you know the plot of Chobits, right?

Darn, now I remember again how I *not* screwed my Ex when she was in her Yuzuki cosplay. Thanks.

[--NightBattery--]

One idea is that this world of the future has fembots doing all sorts of jobs that are currently threatened by automation now... like self driving cars. Why not impractically hot and sexy fembot taxi drivers? That's just an example, but you can see where I'm going with it.

I remember that sophisa, a user absent since the dark time, asked a question about what fembot could do in society besides being nurses, companions, teachers and prostitutes, but she asked the question in such a way that it invited to subtle answers that any powerful AI machine, android or not, could do.
And now i think, that any gynoid that is not going to be in the NCTP axis probably would be a machine that would play with the female physionomy in very shameless ways, like liquid storing boobs, being a music box, a portable kitchen, laundry machine, a walking beer barrel and so and so...they'll do with a little CPU, and that put them apart from fembots meant to act like real humans.

But you know the plot of chobits right?

well I...
I...i never got to understand what the hell was going on on chobits, i was mesmerized on how all the characters where pussies, hehehe.
hmm...yeah, i remember...he has a friend...yeah, the one with the little pocket loli thing..
BUT NO, nothing like that! i wasn't thinking like that!
chii was important and the landlord woman throw her in the trash because....profit?
i never thought in the similarity. ekk.

i just need a simple reason for a guy building a robot...besides screwing.
or at least making believable that he is going to such extent to screw...

u_u i'm terrible with this...
maybe i'm over thinking it...

the easy part is drawing.

[darkbutflashy]

And now i think, that any gynoid that is not going to be in the NCTP axis probably would be a machine that would play with the female physionomy in very shameless ways, like liquid storing boobs, being a music box, a portable kitchen, laundry machine, a walking beer barrel and so and so

Hey, the girls like to be roboticized idols. Look for all the Hatsune Miku cosplayers.

Ideally, a gynoid should have a job where she would fit in, so all the stereotypes apply to her. Or you play with it and she is a police officer, soldier, secret weapon etc. Or you could do both and make her a superhero with a secret identify. But this too is through the mill already, Cutey Honey is very very old. I don't see much sense to put a gorgeous fembot into steelworks, apart from effect. Remember Flashdance?

chii was important and the landlord woman throw her in the trash because....profit?

Nah, for Hideki, which she thought is a nice person, to find her. The landlord woman is the "mother" of Chii and Freya and wanted her "daughters" to be happy. It's the last thing she could do for them now that her husband, their "father", has faded away.

But a lot of those motives for having a fembot are in that story, too. Your idea could be another, sexy side story of Chobits, maybe one of a perverted friend of Hideki or Hideki who took the wrong way.

i just need a simple reason for a guy building a robot...besides screwing.
or at least making believable that he is going to such extent to screw...

Minoru from Chobits wanted it to replace his dead sister, which he worshipped. No sex of course. He did it for profit, too, makes a living from working on fembots.

Why make a robot appear as a woman? But then, why making a robot humanoid at all? Because you want people to relate to it as they would relate to a woman.

And why does it have to be a guy who builds the robot?

[darkbutflashy]

Okay, an idea for a plot:

• Guy is a college student, doesn't have much money. Works at an electronics scrapyard.
• A container with conterfeit robot parts (non-humanoid!) is put on the scrapyard. He cannot let the stuff be destroyed, steals parts over and over again
• Assembles parts at home, just for fun and practice. Cannot tell anyone.
• Because he cannot tell anyone anyway, decides to give the robot a humanoid female apperance.
• Gets entangled, has the dream of creating the perfect humanoid robot.
• AI is fed from a hack on Wolfram Alpha, but things go wrong when the robot finds out 70% of all data in the Internet is about lusty women.
• Robot wants herself to be a woman and try all this stuff she read from.
• Ka-Tsching!

[--NightBattery--]

my god...
i still feel so ashamed that what i described sounded like chobits
but yet, making a comic in the chobit's metaverse sounds great, i would like to do that, it would be easy because all the settings are done.
and i can get away with any kind of dumb dialog.
i could do comics of other metas too, maybe astroboy, i can draw like that, just have to focus.
But first i would like to do something original, after that i guess i could do anything else happily.

i thought in the scrapyard job too.
but i don't know...
maybe it could be that he(or she) works in some high tech science job but with people that doesn't use their resources properly and then it is easier for..him to get pieces, maybe the basic robot too, ho ho, at least in my experience it is easy to take old rotten tech from places like that when everybody is busy not caring about anything else but their tasks. yes, he could be a technician in a well planted job, not super smart, a loner, not antisocial, perhaps still bitter after a failed relationship (heh).

i don't think i want this particular comic to be about the fembot being "especial", perhaps not even meaningful for the characters around her.
you know, like a pet or a servant.
also i would like to give her a very bleak personality so it can be apreciated how she is just a tool and not a person.

But what else...
maybe he could get physically hurt sometimes when the girl malfunctions.
that would be fun.
but i'll try to focus more on the ASFR than in trying to be funny, silly or anime like minded.

maybe I should start with making a few pages and then see what could be the climax and ending after the things get shape.

Okay i think I'm set for the beginning.

thanks for the enlightment.
I hope the output is enjoyable.

Regards, Battery.

[--NightBattery--]

um.

Hello. can any one tell me the proper onomatopoeia for the sound when something gets powered down?

you know, "that" shut down sound that is long and something like peeeeeoooouuu....

[Spaz]

Beeooowwwoooououououoooo

Yep, that's the sound.

[--NightBattery--]

i guess i'll stick too that.
Beoooowouoooo....
no wait...
doesn't that sounds more like a light saber?

[darkbutflashy]

And trains go choo-choo. Put it in!

[--NightBattery--]

Hello.
My name is Battery and i bring honor to my family.

I made a sketch (10th panel)and instead of coloring it i decided to turn it into a word less comic, it is still not finished, but if you are bored you can take a look to it.
i learned to never use small panels by doing this.
bye, Beoooowouoooo....

[darkbutflashy]

I am lost at panel 17. Some kind of dream sequence, prequel or so starting there?

[--NightBattery--]

yep, an explanatory regression.
heheheh.