A different sort of story...

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A different sort of story...

Post by sarabot » Tue Oct 29, 2013 9:17 pm

Disassemble Me.

I am Sarabot.
Disassemble me.
I have taken my clothes off and am laying face up on the exam table.
Take my body apart.
I am requesting a total re-build.
I want to be nothing more than a pile of machinery when you are done.
Look at my perfect female body.
Under my synthetic skin I am metal, plastic, and rubber.
When you are finished disassembling me I will not resemble this female form.
I am an android, made of wires and circuits.
Start by taking off my legs.
I have disengaged the locking mechanism on all of my limbs.
Just snap my right leg off.
*click*
There, now take off my left leg.
*click*
Put my legs aside where I can see them.
Now you can see inside my pelvic unit.
My pelvic unit contains the complex inner-workings of my artificial vagina.
On the outside, my vagina resembles the flawless human reproductive organ.
Inside of my pelvic unit is the machinery that mimics a real vagina's feel and muscle contractions.
My pelvic unit also houses lubricant to simulate a real woman's vaginal secretions.
My synthetic vagina can be removed, re-serviced, and replaced.
I will slide my synthetic vagina out from my pelvic unit.
*whirrr*
Now, take my vagina out of my pelvic unit with your hands.
That's it.
*click*
Place my synthetic vagina on the table and remove my pelvic unit.
Do you see the seam opening up below my belly?
Pull on my hips and slide my pelvic unit from my torso.
*click*
Place it face down with my buttocks in the air.
Admire my perfect, factory-made derrière.
Squeeze it and tell me it feels as perfect as a human woman's ass.
Now, take my arms off.
Begin by pulling on my left arm, it should detach from my torso.
*click*
Follow by taking my right arm off of my body.
*click*
Place my arms aside.
More than half of me has been disassembled.
The only human-like parts remaining are my torso and my head unit.
I want my head unit to remain attached to my main systems inside of my chest.
I must watch my own disassembly.
Take off my abdominal covering.
The rigid, yet flexible latex skin on my belly covers my central access panel and controls.
Start from the opening where my pelvic unit was connected and lift my abdominal covering away.
Inside you can see my metal chassis, forming my rigid skeleton.
Set my abdominal covering aside on the table below my pelvic unit and take off my faceplate.
Do you see the seam forming around my face?
Gently peel my human face off.
Set my facial cover aside and gaze into my eyeballs.
Do you see all of the motors, gears, servos, and actuators that control my facial expressions?
My head unit is built and programmed to mimic expressions and emotions.
The sound of my voice is emanating from a speaker inside of my head unit.
Now remove my hair.
Gently lift my head unit.
Peel back the synthetic skin of my scalp.
Set it on the hangar and touch my cold metal skull.
I no longer resemble a human woman.
The only female parts left on my body are my breasts.
My silicone breasts are attached to my chest panel.
A seam will form down the middle of my bust.
Now separate my breasts and pull them apart.
Open my chest like a set of doors, hinging at my sides.
Yes, like that.
Inside my chest are my main systems.
See the mass of wires running to the block in the center?
That is my central computer.
You may take off my breasts now.
Open my chest panel doors as wide as they will go.
*click*
*click*
There, place my breasts and chest coverings near my robot torso and head unit.
I need you to take a screwdriver and disconnect the bolts holding my chassis onto the remaining skin of my back.
This is the final piece of my synthetic skin you will need to remove for my total re-build.
First loosen the two on my right, then the remaining two on the other side of my android torso.
Place the bolts aside and peel the skin down off of my back.
You have now removed all of my artificial skin.
I consist of a robot head unit connected to a metal torso housing my systems.
Can you do me a favor?
I require testing of my vaginal unit.
Please locate my vaginal unit.
There, now plug in the loose connector to an open port on the main computer in my chest.
*click*
Processing...processing...plug-and-play installation of vaginal unit complete.
You must test out this vaginal unit to find out if it can be installed back into my brand new pelvic unit.
Finger my vagina.
Stick your fingers into my plastic pussy.
Yes, like that.
I feel your every movement.
Oh yes, mmmm...mmhhhh
Now tongue my clitoris.
Yes, unnhhh.
Eat out my synthetic box.
Flick my clit with your tongue like that.
I love it...yesssss.
Watch my eyeballs roll back into my head unit.
The motors in my face would be displaying pleasure on my faceplate.
Without my facial cover on you can see what controls my mouth, cheeks, eyes, and eyelids.
Vaginal systems operating nominally.
I require one more test of my vaginal module.
Take off your pants and stick your penis inside of it.
Get up on the table.
Straddle my robot body.
Use both hands to fuck my detached pussy.
You made me so wet eating out my artificial vagina.
Yessss.
Do me.
Do me like that.
Do my vagina like a Fleshlight.
Pound my pussy with your cock.
Oh yes, ohhhhhhh!!
Ohhhh, mmmmmm, hnnnnnnnn.
Oh yes you're going to give me an orgasm!
You're going to give me an orgasm!
Oh yess. yess. yess. Give me an orgasm...orgasm...orgasmmmmm.
Mmmmmm....OOHHH!!!!! YESSS!!!!! AHHHHNNNN!!!!!
Oh yes yes yes yes!
You are making me cum!
My robot body is experiencing maximum pleasure levels.
Pleasure level at 100%
I love being a robot!
You are fucking my synthetic pussy that's detached from my pelvic unit and hooked up to the main computer in my chest as you watch my robot face display ecstasy.
My vaginal unit is operating nominally.
Test complete.
Test complete.
What are you doing?
You are still fucking my pussy.
Test complete.
No don't pull out.
Don't pull out.
Don't cum on me.
No, please don't cum.
Do not cum on my robot body.
Do not cum on my systems.
Do not cum on my exposed machinery.
*snap*
*pop*
No, malfunction.
Malfunction.
Warning, fluid breach.
Warning, fluid breach.
*pop*
*crackle*
My robot body, what are you doing to my robot body?
My body, my body, my robot, robot, robot.
Malfunction.
Malfunction.
CRITICAL ERROR.
Fluid breach.
ERROR.
ERROR.
Must shut down.
Robot.
Shut down.
Robot.
Shutting dowwwwwwnnnnnnnn.

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Re: A different sort of story...

Post by Sophisa » Tue Oct 29, 2013 10:48 pm

Interesting way of telling it. Very visual, very visceral, yet still up to the reader's imagination. I didn't like the ending, but that's just personal dislike for malfunctions and getting 'facialed'. Was very fun to read otherwise though. :)
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Re: A different sort of story...

Post by RoxxyRobofox » Wed Oct 30, 2013 2:25 am

Great work as always!

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Re: A different sort of story...

Post by Korby » Wed Oct 30, 2013 5:36 am

Wow! Nicely done! A very inventive twist on what might otherwise be pretty familiar territory. Artfully done. I like it!

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That is a ill idea"
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Re: A different sort of story...

Post by BA2 » Wed Oct 30, 2013 7:19 am

Most original little story in a while and very nice indeed.

I wasn't sure what to expect as I started off with the very short lines (on my iPhone so couldn't see much up ahead): 'poem?' I thought... I love the way the sparse writing style blossomed out as I scrolled down to fill in the detail of the story's climax. You really nailed the willing - even demanding - attitude of the 'bot wanting to be disassembled and then capped it off with the physical expression of of the machine as a used object. For some reason she caught it in the chest, not the face in my imagination... Even the malfunction speak after that was readable and sustained disbelief and this is hard to do (typing random 'b's, 'z's and 't's doesn't work - I know, I've tried). If less is more then this was a little that gave a lot!

Can you write us another one? Please?

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Re: A different sort of story...

Post by dale coba » Thu Oct 31, 2013 3:03 am

sarabot,

For the sharing of such an intimate portrait, may your wireless network host numerous virtually mounted, robust sex drives and over-clocked, robot vaginas.

- Dale Coba
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Re: A different sort of story...

Post by tectile » Thu Oct 31, 2013 9:40 am

I liked this one quite a bit. Kind of poetic.

Is it wrong that I'm hearing Maya Angelou read this in my head?

My brain is working in strange ways these days. Maybe professional help is needed?

Just kidding I really did enjoy the story and thanks for sharing.

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Re: A different sort of story...

Post by Trace Venom » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:37 pm

I have to say, I enjoyed this very, VERY much. :applause:

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Re: A different sort of story...

Post by liliwinnt6 » Sun Nov 03, 2013 6:33 pm

Nice story, I like it very much!
Fellas, you may address me as Boris, my ID could be troublesome for you to call me.
BTW, my stories would be updated without notifications.
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Re: A different sort of story...

Post by D.Olivaw » Mon Nov 04, 2013 7:49 am

Great little story! I'm convinced that first-person is underutilized in our stories. It creates a really interesting narrative tension through the squared-circle of describing the subjective experience of an entity without subjective experience. That narrative tension, between the appearance of subjectivity and the reality of the fembot being an object really does it for me (and from what some have shared, at least a few others around these parts). Thank you for writing.
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