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by --NightBattery-- » Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:15 pm
...(be readed with sean connery voice)
the image is self explanatory, yes.
faster mostly because the textual clue.
but, to my little knowledge, the lower frames can be, deceitful in a logical order, it creates the eye confusion that we are seeing one image of two vaginas conected to a big block that has the image of a computer, of course, due the illusion of space in the computer ""scene" we can say that it does not, and that it is actually happening somewhere else; maybe adding a shadow to the "syncing scene" instead of a tick frame or just moving that scene a little more up could help, but that would be a little hard because it would change the order of your whole "page"
Hhmmm...
or Maybe switching the order of the gals up there could also be helpful since you already have the syncing scene and the two vaginas down there to explain that they are join together? i don't know... is just what i think, i hope i written that in an logical syntaxis, and useful, for you.
Regards
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