Hi Everyone: My 1st Scifi Story is up :)!
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Hi Everyone: My 1st Scifi Story is up :)!
Hi Everyone:
I like to tell everyone that my 1st Scifi Story is up and there 72 pics with my story also. My story is on my main site, http://www.angelfire.com/celeb2/robotchamber , press "Stories" and enjoy ! Also I like to invite you to my msn club too, just press "Msn Club" on my main site too.
I like to tell everyone that my 1st Scifi Story is up and there 72 pics with my story also. My story is on my main site, http://www.angelfire.com/celeb2/robotchamber , press "Stories" and enjoy ! Also I like to invite you to my msn club too, just press "Msn Club" on my main site too.
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Thanks for the comment :)!
Thanks, I know the pics took a longtime to make but I hope everyone like my story so far. Noidguy & I are taking about having my story with 72 pics on his this site, so hopefully soon Noidguy will make a statement. By the way do you think my story needs a sequel?? I take any suggestions on ideas for a sequel, just leave messages on the forum.
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Great site idea! Excellent work so far!
The only advice I would offer is that you combine the story and images together more effectively...
Perhaps include dialog and narration on the actual images themselves instead of seperately. That way we could click through the story instead of reading first and then seeing pics.
The only advice I would offer is that you combine the story and images together more effectively...
Perhaps include dialog and narration on the actual images themselves instead of seperately. That way we could click through the story instead of reading first and then seeing pics.
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Maybe for the SEQUEL :)
That Great News Noidguy! Also thanks to ASFRyan for the idea, I might do that for the sequel , so stay tune!
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