New idea: Need feedback

[La Femme Nikki]

So I need some feedback...my new story will be about a fembot built and programmed by her girlfriend who's a tech to be a domme (in complete contrast to a normal robot who does as their told). But her rebellious attitude causes her problems at her job and to take action by reprogramming her into a robot that takes order from everyone. Now the girlfriend has to fix her before too much damage is done. Especially when her supervisor who we discover is also a bot tries to destroy her.

So yay or nay?

[bilbo]

I second Kishins comments, if you want proof readers just give me a shout.

[La Femme Nikki]

Awesome!!! Bilbo- thank you I'll def. keep you posted with writing updates.

Also list of characters so far...

Dominique (the domme fembot)-Mila Kunis (umm why not?)

Melanie (the girlfriend)- Sara Foster (loooved her in DEBS)

Tamara (Dominique's boss at work)- Mary Elizabeth Winstead (her evil character from SkyHigh was my reasoning here plus she is gorgeous)

I'll likely keep these characters regardless but still wanna hear feedback as always

[Spaz]

I'm alright with a Mila Kunis fembot...

[DukeNukem 2417]

Awesome!!! Bilbo- thank you I'll def. keep you posted with writing updates.

Also list of characters so far...

Dominique (the domme fembot)-Mila Kunis (umm why not?)

Melanie (the girlfriend)- Sara Foster (loooved her in DEBS)

Tamara (Dominique's boss at work)- Mary Elizabeth Winstead (her evil character from SkyHigh was my reasoning here plus she is gorgeous)

I'll likely keep these characters regardless but still wanna hear feedback as always

If anyone does manips of these, it would be supremely epic.

[body]

I hope that all members are android.
It wishes too much?

[Spaz]

I hope that all members are android.
It wishes too much?

Perhaps, but I personally find it more interesting when there is at least one genuine human involved.

[La Femme Nikki]

Yes the girlfriend, Melanie is human

[Spaz]

Just out of curiosity, are there going to be any male characters, friends/coworkers?

[La Femme Nikki]

Ya when she's reprogrammed into a more subservient role, the other males take advantage and use her a sex bot.

Also this could go to ways: should Melanie reprogram her after Dominique's personality gets too much for even her? Or should Dominique's boss Tamara take control and reprogram upon finding out Dominique's a gynoid?

The one that gets the most responses is the one I go with

[Spaz]

The first choice.

[La Femme Nikki]

I'm curious...why?

[Spaz]

Because, the potential for conflict when the human attempts to reprogram the domme should provide a more interesting story.