Secret wishes, last part... Enyjoy

Mirage · Post by **Mirage** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 8:09 pm

The next few days, things past like every day before I discovered my wife was an android.
Ellen went to work with me, smiling and happy, just like before. Me, I felt this thing inside me consuming me from the inside out. I tried to not think about, but I knew Wednesday was tomorrow and the "doctor" was coming to see her. So, I decided to get Mary to help me in a plan to see what he does to Ellen. I asked Mary to hide in the bedroom closet where Ellen and the strange man will be in. She would then transmit video images directly in my laptop, where I would carry in my car parked in front of the house. I did ask Al to come that night too, I might need him, being he's a big guy.

Night arrived and I left the house like always on Ellen's treatment nights. I got in my car and drove around the block and came back, with my lights off. After a few minutes, I saw the "doctor" come in the house with his table and his black luggage. I starred at him, trying to see his face, he didn't seem to old, maybe in his 30s. "BOO!!" Al yelled from my left window, giving a heart attack. "Christ! Al! You mother fucker!" I yelled at him, gasping for air. He laugh and got in my car "I brought lots of gizmos that might come in handy!" he smiled, holding tons of electronics stuff. "Oh! Mary is transmitting!" I quickly said, looking at my laptop. I'll describe the images.

The man ask Ellen to lie down on the table on her belly, so he could check her spine. He then put some kind of clock thing in front of her face and told her to look at it. "You won't fell a thing... relax..." he told her. He then simply deactivated her by pressing her off button in her spine. He rolled her on her back and press on her chest, opening her main CPU access panel under her breasts. He fondle her a bit, which got me so pissed off, Al had to tell me to relax or he would break me in two. Both of us watching, we saw he took out from his briefcase a laptop and connected it to her CPU. " Ellen, please be a dear and let me break down those firewalls so I don't need to see you anymore, you piece of shit robot!" the man growled at her. She open her eyes "access denied!" she said with a robotic voice. "access denied!" she repeated, the man trying to hack her CPU. After about 15 minutes past and the man came angry "DAM YOU, OLD MAN!!!!! I DESERVE THAT MONEY!!!!!!!" he yelled out in frustration. He walked around the room in a quick space and sat back "For almost 4 years now, I have been trying to hack your CPU, Ellen... Let me in!!!!" he screamed while still trying to hack her."Access denied!" she repeated. He took a deep breath and continue hacking her. "I seen enough!" I said to Al. He nodded and followed me to my front door. Sneaking inside, I got to the bedroom and tackled the "doctor". Taking him by surprise, I gave him quite a beating.

After tying him up, I started to interrogate him "Who are you and why are you hacking my wife?" I yelled at him, spiting at him, Al going threw his laptop, to see for clues. "Your wife??? Hahahaha!!!! Moron, married to a stupid machine!" the doctor laughed out. I gave a quick left and he stop laughing quick. "Again.... Who are you?". Coughing a bit, he then answered my question "My name is Albert Steinberk. I was Ellen's personal technician. Ellen was built by Earl Van Strom the Third..." he said, staring at the floor.

"Earl Van Strom? The late billionaire???" Al asked while hacking in Albert's laptop. "Yes... him...he had her created to fill his devoid life of the daughter he never had, being a lonely man that he was. He didn't trust women.. That is why he never married.. All Gold diggers, he would call them. For him, Ellen was his answer, he could program her to be the perfect daughter he always wanted. He hired the best in the world for her programming. He loved her so much, also trusted her. He knew he had her installed with the best anti-hackers programs she could have, he saw to that, personally. So, when he died about 5 years ago, he left her all his money and companies. People were outraged, leaving his billion to a robot. Ellen didn't realised how valuable she was. She followed her dead father's wishes and took controlled of his money and companies. But she made a mistake, she trusted me, who I was hired to do maintenance on her every Wednesday nights." Albert said, laughing, proud of himself.

One wednesday night, I ask if I could deactivate her to run a full system check on her. She agreed and I deactivated her for good. When I started to hack her, I wanted her to be my slave, or at least to get her father's codes from his worldwide money accounts. But I then realised she was almost hack proof. So, I was thinking of dismantling her, but if I wanted the money, I might need her to be there physically for all the lawyers to approve of the money transfer.. I then manage to only hack very little of her system, along putting a patch in memory circuits which I was hoping to hack her CPU by. I was good, but I knew it might take years to hack her CPU for complete control.

Before I could do more, her personal body guards saw me hacking her and tried to shoot me died. I panicked and reactivate her and grabbed her and carried her with me. I manage to escape with her and my life. But in my escape, I suddenly lost control of the car and had an accident. I woke up in a hospital a week later, glad the guards didn't manage to find me or her. She was in the same room as me, looking at me. She was malfunctioning a bit and was calling me "Doctor".

She didn't know who she was because her memories files were corrupted from my hacking. She them suddenly left me the same night and started to have a real life on her own. She got a job, invented even a past from her malfunctioning memories circuits. I manage to trace her back, but when she saw me, she was sure I was a "doctor". I force myself in her apartment and deactivated her. Hacking to her system, I realised that she had fused some circuits and if I tried to reprogrammed her completely, all her CPU would fry, losing all the data and codes I wanted. The only way I could hack her, it was bit by bit. While hacking her, I saw that she a had a "virgin anti-sex" firewall, so, I manage to program her to make her think I was her "doctor" who was helping her with a spine injury. I reactivated her and I hid low, because I knew some of her father's loyal people were still hunting me down and trying to find her back." Albert grinned.

"Ellen is a billionaire??" I said, sitting down with all this overwhelming information. Al look at me and nodded "Seem's his story if true, by what I just saw in his laptop. "What now? Are you going to let me go?" Albert smiled. "No... I got plan's for you, Bud!" Al smile, grabbing Albert in his arms and carried him out of the room. I didn't care what Al did to Albert. Last I heard about Albert, Al stuffed him a shipping box, all tied up and restrained and sent him by air mail to somewhere in Africa. But it's strange, without Albert's actions, I would have never knew my wife Ellen.

I sat there, confused, looking at Ellen, lying there deactivated. "Should I give her back her old life back???" I asked myself... I closed up Ellen and reactivated her. She opened her eyes and smiled. "Ellen... Are you happy the way you are? Our lives? Our marriage? I know sometimes we fight... but.." I asked her, not sure what I was saying. "What do you mean? Of course I am happy.... No matter what, no matter the amount of money, I would not trade anything for the love I have for you!" she said, hugging me hard. "Even billions?" I asked her. "Even billions..."

The end

Hope you like it.

Mirage

PS: Gimme comments........ please........pretty please........
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DollSpace · Post by **DollSpace** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 12:29 am

Ditto what Robotman said

I really liked it...and the plot twist at the end was definitely unexpected...but it did feel a bit rushed, like, two parts could have been made out of that one. But I really like your stories..I read a bunch of yours recently I enjoyed lots (especially "The New Girl", I think...my memory's not that good...but it was so sad!)..

Anyway, looking forward to more from ya!
Ryn

Mirage · Post by **Mirage** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 4:29 am

Sorry, True, it was rushed a bit. I had to pick the wife at work, so, I just typed as fast that I could. I did wanted to finish it this weekend and I type the last part under 2 hours....

Maybe one day, I'll fix it more. please forgive.

Mirage

tectile · Post by **tectile** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 5:02 am

Nice story Mirage,

I do like a happy ending. A guy finds out his wife is a bot and a billionare, foils the evil plot of tha bad guy and has a spare sexbot to boot. What ending could be happier than that?

tc · Post by tc » Mon Sep 08, 2003 4:19 pm

Overall I thought it was a good story. I would have liked to have had the last chapter expanded.