What is the most important subject of a story for you?

Mirage · Post by **Mirage** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 11:35 am

I was just studying quickly my last two stories (how many people read them)and I realised not even 1/3 of members read ADpolice #2, while I have a higher # of readers for Tennis.

Obouisly, since this a fetish site, I must realised like anywhere in the world, SEX SELLS!!!!!

In my stories, I always try to add spice to it, but not too much (Since, I am usualy at work writting theses during my breaks) and I do have a great real sex life at home.

Being the romantic at hearth, SEX is never what the main focus of my stories. Some stories when too concentrated on the same subject (sex) just makes me want to scream and hide under my desk.

I think I touched many style and subjects (To sci-fi to western to comedy, etc)

So, my question is, what is for you, the most important while reading a story ???

Mirage

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tinyspider · Post by **tinyspider** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 1:36 pm

Well, not obviously just sex, if it were just for that I think we all would be spending our time on "preview" section of porn sites

. As with any ASFR related matter, the things that turn people on deals with the ASFR stuff they're attracted to. Mine is related with things like remote controls, shutdowns, freezes, fembots being controlled / frozen / reposed without her notice/consentment. and last of all some sex but not sex as if the fembot/gynoid were a human enjoying sex (wow 3 "sex" words on a single sentence!, I'll try to control my sex drive!

) but more like she's not aware of.

Captain · Post by **Captain** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 2:49 pm

Hmmm,
Well, Sexual but not too explicit, a bit of a tease, kind of like a courtship or a highschool encounter. Where everything seems to be going a bit too well, ...Then...Something happens that was not quite expected.Be it a malfunction, ever so slight a first, or.....
It seems that your style of writting has a Rhythm to it. Very Professional. If I wanted porn....I could ,(and others out there could too..) just get to it and download or read Cyber Deep Throat.
IE Guy sees Robot or girl, She immed Does him, He gets off then she blows up...
But, I think it has to have a balance or rhythm to it, that frankly most people miss (like foreplay). Your stories to have a sense of style and pace. Other writers seem to posses similar traits to a different degree
Silent Luker-a master (best stories on the web) but needs to write more
Brueckmann- stories with a Dark twist like a slap on the face of the future.
EHY-Great concepts
Fembot Lovr 7- Great ideas nicely put!
Faceless 001- great saga but needs to finish it...(Fantastic Voyage).
[b]And Mirage. Someone with Imagination and inspiration.[color=red][/color[/b]][b][/b]

jolshefsky · Post by **jolshefsky** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 6:08 pm

Long time listener, first time caller. LOL.

I like stuff like "My Sister, The Robot." It's got a somewhat realistic portrayel of future technology and it has women who become aware of being robots. I don't like that the girls are so young, but I can pretend it's college instead.

I'm not a big fan of sex leading to short circuits because that's just bad design. I don't much like chrome, numerical names, or forced conversions either.

Repairs and disassembly are good. Sexless is good for some reason too. I'd like to see a repair manual someday ... with pictures.

captbcn · Post by **captbcn** » Wed Jul 23, 2003 8:21 pm

well for me vincent I don't really mind the high school thing (just graduated myself) but anywho... I'm not in it for just sex too but for me at least it just takes away from the fantasy when the thing you fantasise about turns against you (like stories with the fembot with an alterior motive or one that kills whoever has sex with "her") but I'm also not a person that believes in fembot cruelty. but that's just me, I'm more the romantic type that favors making love to fucking.

ehy · Post by **ehy** » Thu Jul 24, 2003 6:50 am

Vincent wrote: I'd like to see a repair manual someday ... with pictures.

Well, not a *repair* manual, but if you haven't seen it yet, this might interest you. (And the rest of the site: http://members.fortunecity.com/asfr/control/index.html.)

EHY

jknight_2000 · Post by **jknight_2000** » Thu Jul 24, 2003 1:41 pm

Interest question, Mirage.

To tell you the truth, I like a lot of your stories, because of the clever plot-twists within them. It really makes the stories enjoyable (no offense, if I wanted pure sex in a story - I'd get a Harlequin "Novel"). I think the most important thing is that if the story is should have some romance/sex in it -- It should be part of the story not the whole story.

JKnight

P.S. - The only piece you did I really did get was the "Fighting Love" series. What was the brain child behind this group of shorts. The chapters really borderlined on the Horror/Macabre genre. It would have made a great "Blue Underground" movie.

Brytestar · Post by **Brytestar** » Fri Jul 25, 2003 12:03 pm

I favor a romantic element. Not the gynoid that's hollow and can't love in anyway shape or form. In some story the guy moves on to another romantic interest as the gynoid is simply left static with the author having NO INTENTION in adding life to that 'empty' gynoid character. Sorry I simply favor gynoid taking on far more human characteristics maybe its just me. I'm just too picky on stories.

I hope that one day I'll post a tale that can make my point. I look forward to the next tale posted.

ASFRyan · Post by **ASFRyan** » Sat Jul 26, 2003 8:05 pm

Conversions, conversions, conversions.

Gynoids and fembots do nothing for me unless they were once a woman. I want to know how she ended up as one, the motivations of both her and her converter, the process itself, and the results of the conversion on her.

Cyborgs by Sheep@biosys is among my favorite stories.

tectile · Post by **tectile** » Sun Jul 27, 2003 9:01 pm

It's hard to say what the most important thing about a story is for me.

I really enjoyed "Clockwork summer" and "Tales of Syntec".
Two stories that could not be more different but in both cases they let me hoist that big weight of disbelief we all cary around rite up over my head and hold it there while I read.

mliska1 · Post by **mliska1** » Sun Jul 27, 2003 10:35 pm

[quote="ASFRyan"]Conversions, conversions, conversions.
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The same goes for me.