"The Offer, Part 3" Excerpt!

[robolvr]

An excerpt from the first chapter of "The Offer, Part 3" is available RIGHT NOW on my site! Check it out at:

http://members.aol.com/robolvr

I'm working on getting the chapters online. But in the meanwhile, please post your thoughts and feedback here on the FBC boards!

RL

[Android675]

I've been lucky enough to get a preview of the finished version of The Offer, Part 3, and I encourage everyone who's a transformation fan (and even those who aren't) to take a look. Keraptis has made an incredible contribution to the ASFR story archives that, in my opinion, is matched only by his previous story, "The Offer, Part 2." If you haven't read that story yet, you should definitely check it out before delving into Part 3. If you have no familiarity with the "Offer" universe at all, you should start with Part 1, which is also on Robolvr's site - although, as the author, I still feel it pales in comparison to Parts 2 and 3.

As always, feedback will be appreciated - especially in the case of a work that took this much time and effort. I think the final version is somewhere around 150 pages, and it took Keraptis over a year to write it. Quite an accomplishment considering that the demands of real life always take time away from efforts like this. Even a few lines will be welcome, although more in-depth comments are encouraged.

So, congratulations to Keraptis on one hell of an accomplishment. Thanks for making the world of ASFR that much richer!

Android

[andoroido]

Very nice story so far...
send it to Hollywood, they're out of ideas, aren't they?
(Charlie's Angels: Full Suck, exhausting the comic book supply,
MORE car chase movies...)

look forward to seeing the final product, and willing to wait if it means a better quality product.

andoroido

[serf]

Wow. Really like what I've read so far. Definately looking forward to reading the entire story.

Just have to remain patient!