2 poems

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2 poems

Post by Drea » Thu May 10, 2007 12:08 pm

Hi there,
it's not exactly about fembots, but it might still be interesting for you... the two poems I wrote. The brides and the grooms point of view... let your fantasy add something to your liking... have fun!

THE GROOM
It's me to wear the breeches,
it's you to wear a skirt,
don't fear my little darling,
I'll make sure you won't get hurt

I enjoy being the provider
you should enjoy being my bride
the little things I ask from you
should make you beam with pride

I can't wear those high heels
I won't ever try on a dress
I think it would just look silly
but there's one thing I confess

I admire you modelling it
wearing all these fancy things
So I want to get hold of you
lets just exchange rings

I promise to be gentle
I promise to be kind
but please do all the things for me
that come into my mind

Present yourself as "my" woman
blushing shyly when I talk about you
accept yourself as my property
that's what I ask from you

I want to see you corsetted
encaged in steel and satin
the perfect hourglass figure
despite all the pain

I want to lock you in high heels
I want forever hear that sweet sound
when you walk just on tiptoes
when your shoes hit the ground

Your steps should be tiny
never again should you run
giving plenty of time
to watch your wiggling bum

A stair should take you a prisoner
as well as a cobbled street
I am so longing to see you that way
watch to risen my sexual greed

I want to veil you my darling
watch your face through satin
and it should be only me
to lift that garment now and then

I want to use padlocks
and keep you entrapped that way
think of it as some jewelry
making you an easy prey

For everything I want to do with you
every sensual or embarressing thing
and I want to put chains on your hands and arms
so you finally become just a thing

A plaything to toy with
a little dolly in my house
and I can play with you
like a cat with a mouse

Don't look sad my darling
don't shed tears upon this
you'll be a vision of beauty
I promise you this

So will you please marry me
let me lead you into a new life
to become my sweet plaything
forever my helpless obedient wife.

*** now to change the point of view ***

THE BRIDE
Catch me
hold me
bind me to this place

Wrap me
pack me
but leave alone my face

Imprison my body
hem it in satin
a vision of beauty
your helpless villein

My steps so dainty
I balance in my shoes
with all my weight lasting
on my nylon covered toes

My torso is rigid
unable to bend down
and smiling you fasten
the small golden crown

On top of my head
to hold the veil
that will limit my vison -
what a lovely sight

My arms in long gloves
securely sewn to my dress
am now a little plaything
no more - no less

So cute and so helpless
but you make me feel
that this is what I wanted
and forever will

So will you please marry me
kiss your imprisoned bride
and walk away with her
beaming with pride

"Will you promise to love me -
forever be mine?"
I give you a shy nod:
yes - I feel fine

Please keep me a captive
never release the chains
it makes my heart jumping
and blood rushing my veins

That's the life I long for
don't deny me the joy
to be your beautiful
but completely helpless toy.


How do you like these?

/curtsey
Do you see the pretty mannequin staring motionless at you through the shop window, modeling a lovely pink dress and some high heels? Why don't you come closer and say "hello"? That mannequin is me...

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Post by Tio » Fri May 11, 2007 4:48 am

Quite good. I do like but feel that these are very bondage fetish and not very fembot.

Also I feel the poem from the guys POV to be quite acurate but I find the womans one a little lacking.

I do really like the first poem though, how it slowly changes pace and feeling.
"I wish I could at least 30 percent
Maybe 50 for pleasure then skip all the rest"

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