The offer, part 2

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The offer, part 2

Post by Mirage » Mon Apr 10, 2006 9:03 pm

The offer
by Mirage

Part 2


"You are kidding? Is this a joke? Am I on TV?" asked Tom, looking around the room for cameras. "Lory, come here..." the old man said to her. Lory walked in front of the old man and he unbutton her blouse from behind. Tom looked on, not sure what was the old man doing to her.
She suddenly made a blank face and the slowly tilted her head down, her eyes wide open. "Lory was built last year by my company. Special order of course... she has the most advance A.I. you will ever see. She doesn't quite understand that she is just a machine. She has "spunk"...self aware... she does follow all my commands, but only to me. She is a stubborn mule sometimes, but I love her that way. She's the best assistance I ever had..." the old man was saying, tears in his eyes forming.

Tom got up and walked up to her, and look slowly in her back. "Wow... she is a machine.." he said, looking at her open back panel, right between her shoulder blades. "Well? Are you still interested in the house or not?" the old man asked Tom.

A few weeks later...

Tom was standing over the coffin of Mr.'Randolf, thinking of the strange offer he gave him before he died. "The house is yours, but promise me you are never to touch Lory's circuits ever or try to reprogram her in any way. If you do, Lory will simply stop functioning for good..
‘Are you okay, Tom?" asked Lory beside him. "Sure..." he responded, not sure how to handle her. "Let's go home..." she simply smiled to him. Tom nodded and followed her. Arriving to the house, Tom felt strange. Lory help him in and did everything nice to him. "Lory, why are you doing all this for me? I am not your master... Come sit down with me." he told her quickly. "When this house became yours, I became yours too..." she simply replied. Tom asked her to sit beside him. Lory did and asked if he wanted something.

"Well, since I meet you, I can't stop thinking of you..." Tom replied. "Really.." Lory simply smiled back. "originally, I want this house, but now, I want you..." Tom said, grabbing her hands with his. "Tom, I am your assistance...only that.." she said cold to him. "Okay, assist me with my sex life.." he smiled to her. "I'll go buy for you a playboy and a box of Kleenex.." she smiled and left Tom alone in the room. "Funny!" he yelled to her, frustrated.

While going threw the legal papers, Tom found Lory's manual. Reading it, he now knew all her panels, ports and schematics. "Lory, can you come here, I need your help!" he yelled to her in his bedroom. Lory came in and asked what she could do to help. "You see that box, I can't reach it there, can I lift you up, so you can grab it?" he ask her, pointing to a box that was high on a cabinet. "Sure.., but no grabbing my ass." she told him. He put his hands on her waist and lifted her up to grab the box. While she stretch to grab the box, Tom inserted his left hand underneath her blouse and found the small bump to press to open her back panel. "Hey??" Lory yelled out, confused by what Tom was doing. Quickly Tom found her off button and pressed it. Lory simply then went all limp. Tom put her in his bed and gazed at her. She was beautiful, dress like always in a business suit type blouse and skirt. Her eyes were wide open, showing no response.





Tom could not help himself and started to undress her. Removing her clothing quickly, he saw her naked breasts first. They were perfectly round breasts with small nipples. He grabbed them and squeezed them and they felt real. Quickly, he removed her skirt and underwear and revealed her private parts. A nice long furry line was between her legs. He slowly open her legs and inserted one finger inside her pussy. To his surprise, Lory became self aware again, letting a gasp out. "Fingerprint not recognized.. Any more sexual acts on this unit will force the unit to self destruct." Lory said in a robotic voice. She then blinked and look around confused. "Why am I naked?" she yelled to Tom. She then slap Tom hard on the face and left the room pissed off, her back panel closing by itself.

To be continued...

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Post by TheSpotConlon » Tue Apr 11, 2006 5:32 am

He has returned!

Interesting work as always, Mirage. Why do I have a feeling that this one's going to have one of your trademark "surprise endings?"

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Post by Mare_Vir » Tue Apr 11, 2006 8:05 am

Good stuff, I just have a concern about the title, since we alreay have The Offer by Android675 and The Offer, Parts 2 and 3 by Kerpatis as mainstays of ASFR fiction.

Mirage, I would hate to see this work overlooked because of confusion over its title.

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Post by DollSpace » Tue Apr 11, 2006 11:28 am

A very promising beginning! I very much look forward to hearing more from you - your stories were greatly missed on this board! *giggle*

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Post by Mirage » Tue Apr 11, 2006 4:48 pm

DOH! I knew I saw that title before!

Can someone change it into "an offer that can't be refuse." instead.


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Post by DollSpace » Tue Apr 11, 2006 5:53 pm

Mirage wrote:DOH! I knew I saw that title before!

Can someone change it into "an offer that can't be refuse." instead.


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*changed* It's all set in the story archive, but I can't change posts in this forum, I don't think...^^;

I look forward to part three!
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