New story from purplebootsgywr - "Clockwork soldier&quo

Robotdoll · Post by **Robotdoll** » Thu Feb 02, 2006 7:16 pm

http://www.pridesites.com/omelissokomos ... kwork.html

Not actually new, but one he never got around to posting on mcstories.

Folks, this one's a classic. Write him and say thank you.

keraptis · Post by **keraptis** » Fri Feb 03, 2006 11:14 pm

It's a well-written story, though I think it could be edited down to about 25% of its length without losing anything. WAY too much unnecessary dialogue and explanation.

More on topic for this discussion board, however, it has nothing to do with fembots. It's about a man being turned into a clockwork soldier by a male dollmaker in the service of a third male, the "master" of the tale. I didn't stick with it long enough to see if it leads to explicit sex between the men, but it's clear that it's an M/M story with no significant female characters. Not that there's anything wrong with that (everyone say it with me), but it's probably more a fit for the EMCSA or LTBSA than this board.

Just my humble opinion.

Robotdoll · Post by **Robotdoll** » Sat Feb 04, 2006 6:00 am

Well, not for nothing, but no, there's no sex at all, and the reason I brought it to everyone's attention is that it's just slopping over with process, the whole thing's about the characters training and conditioning, the occasional resistance, and all the stuff that rings the bells of a lot of the folks here.

I think it'd be a shame if one couldn't get past the gender of the characters - you'll be missing a great story.