H Is For Heuristic Part 56 - Gas Stop

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Korby
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Post by Korby » Wed Dec 14, 2005 1:42 am

I quote Good Ol' Charlie Brown:

AAAAAAAUUUUUUUUGHHHHH!

because a) your writing has gotten me emotionally invested enough in Heather's character that I hate to see anything bad happen to her and 2) this is a hell of a good place for a cliffhanger!

I haven't commented on any of the recent chapters, but I've sure as heck been reading them. You definitely know how to keep your audience interested!

Keep it up!
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Post by tc » Wed Dec 14, 2005 5:34 pm

Ok, I wasn't expecting that. I guess I should have expected it, but I got caught up in the get away
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Please sir, I want some more.

Post by maax » Wed Dec 14, 2005 10:16 pm

I think I know how this is going to end up, but I'm not positive so I'm on as much of a cliffhanger as everyone else. Can't wait to see what you do next.
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