New author story starter

1001011001 · Post by **1001011001** » Mon Jul 11, 2005 10:05 pm

A good start this is, indeed.

kb7rky · Post by **kb7rky** » Mon Jul 11, 2005 11:06 pm

Oh, definitely a good start.

Would like to see more from this up-and-coming writer

Doug

Korby · Post by **Korby** » Tue Jul 12, 2005 2:41 am

Nicely written and an interesting start. I wouldn't half mind seeing where it goes from here.

tc · Post by tc » Tue Jul 12, 2005 4:01 pm

I also think this is a good start and would like to see more.

Trace Venom · Post by **Trace Venom** » Tue Jul 12, 2005 4:04 pm

A start in the right direction.

I would encourage whomever wrote the story to continue.

Big thumbs up.

roachbob · Post by **roachbob** » Tue Jul 12, 2005 7:37 pm

...a very interesting begining indeed.

More, please?

DollSpace · Post by **DollSpace** » Thu Jul 14, 2005 4:17 pm

So far it's great; I can't wait to see where it's going! I do wonder if I should be archiving this in the story section as it's going along, though...I don't even know who to credit it to!

Rynnie

handle · Post by **handle** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 7:22 am

I don't see why not. We could credit it to Kishin with the disclaimer

(Kishin is only the submitter. The actual writer of this story has not yet requested a forum ID. When this is done, it will be noted.)

until she overcomes her shyness. I don't see any issue with doing soon. Of course, we'll also need Kishin to stress this to her in order to avoid any misunderstandings.

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It was just a suggestion!

handle · Post by **handle** » Sat Jul 23, 2005 6:36 am

I know I'm in danger of multiposting and sounding like I'm talking to myself, but... Kishin, is your protege suffering from Writer's Block atm? I'd like to encourage her to dig in deeper as her style of writing is a shade softer than half the stories I've read in ASFR in 4 years...

If she starts writing for the community, I'd move that it'd be a godsend most likely.

bilbo · Post by **bilbo** » Sat Jul 23, 2005 1:10 pm

The female touch realy does make a difference. Kishin, your friend is a brilliant writer. Its nice to have a female point of view about a female bot. Is she harbouring secret disires or just good imagination.

DollSpace · Post by **DollSpace** » Sat Jul 23, 2005 10:26 pm

bilbo wrote:The female touch realy does make a difference. Kishin, your friend is a brilliant writer. Its nice to have a female point of view about a female bot. Is she harbouring secret disires or just good imagination.

Hey, I'm a girl and I've been writing android and clockwork fiction for quite awhile now! lol... Granted, I haven't written anything recently, but...

(blush)

Rynnie

xandimouse · Post by **xandimouse** » Tue Jul 26, 2005 6:43 pm

That y'all like it.

But does anyone have any constructive criticism? Questions?

I'm not new to writing..but i'm new to this subject....

I always thought this 'fantasy' of mine was something silly, brought on by the Bionics, (i can never remember her name...but) the lil maid girl who was pretending to be human (that was my favorite), and Deadly Friend (I think that's what it's called.) I"m sure there's more..but those are the main ones.

It's made me *INCREDIBLY* ecstatic to find this community.

Thanks y'all.

handle · Post by **handle** » Tue Jul 26, 2005 9:57 pm

No shame in admitting to an ASFR fetish, I should think. Historical evidence exists of the Ancient Greeks having had cases of both genders engaging in loving statues and other surrogates representing the other gender... or the same gender (Ancient Greek sexuality was much more open and complex than the sort we encounter in most societies today) And this isn't a one-off thing: the fantasy of an artificial being propelled by some man-made form of workings or energy has always been encountered even in societies where the only sciences existing in group knowledge has been magic.

P.S. Can I get your autograph?
P.P.S. Just joking. But something about your writing style touches me in a way I haven't felt since I first logged into ASFR.com.

DollSpace · Post by **DollSpace** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 3:13 pm

Now that I know the author for the story I can post it in the Story Archive! I also wanted to give the author proper credit for what's been an awesome story so far! Keep writing; I look forward to reading more!

Ryn

Baron · Post by **Baron** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 8:26 pm

Nicely done, dear Lady!!

So nicely done that it brought me in from the shadows to encourage you - you've made an EXCELLENT debut in this community - by offering up something that enhances same!!

Not bad, not bad at all - I wish more "newbies" had such a positive and creative approach when they pop up the first time................

Hope this is the beginning of a L-O-N-G relationship between you and the community!!!

(And I can say that - I'm one of the "greybeards" here........

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K.U.T.G.W!!!!

New author story starter

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