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KingJeremy · Post by **KingJeremy** » Fri Oct 22, 2004 3:07 pm

Now THAT'S a story! Unbelievable work 33cl33.

KingJeremy

jpetoh · Post by **jpetoh** » Fri Oct 22, 2004 3:46 pm

Well freakin' done! Lovin' those malfunction stories.

Korby · Post by **Korby** » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:22 am

Very good! Me likey! I haven't had much time to do any writing myself, recently, so I'm very happy to see some story action happening...

tectile · Post by **tectile** » Sat Oct 23, 2004 5:47 am

He swings!

It's a long fly ball to centerfield!

It mite be... It could be... IT IS!!!

That one's outahere folks!

Another homerun for 33cl33!

BA · Post by BA » Mon Oct 25, 2004 10:26 am

Excellent stuff! I loved the way you built the anticipation (I would say suspense but thats hard to do on this board...) I was more and more gagging to see how Nat's little secret would come out with every line.

Keep doin more!!

blake_sigma · Post by **blake_sigma** » Mon Oct 25, 2004 1:21 pm

Very Good story!!! I like it very much.

Keep up the good Work.

DollSpace · Post by **DollSpace** » Mon Oct 25, 2004 3:04 pm

*giggles* ^_^ Nice story ^^

Ryn

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Nice Story