This has been available for a while in the original Japanese, but I thought I'd bring this up now since there's now an English translation. The English, IMO, takes some liberties in the translation, but I suppose that's what makes it a "rewrite."
https://nhentai.net/g/294550/209/ (JP)
https://nhentai.net/g/351609/ (EN)
Kazuma Yamazaki: "Ideal Girlfriend" (Risou no Kanojo)
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Re: Kazuma Yamazaki: "Ideal Girlfriend" (Risou no Kanojo)
What sort of liberties does it make from the translation, if you know any?
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Re: Kazuma Yamazaki: "Ideal Girlfriend" (Risou no Kanojo)
Well, for one, there's a very clear mistranslation. When the guy asks for iced coffee, he's talking about the weather being hot, not the coffee (もう暑いからねー -- 暑い is used for weather, while 熱い is used for objects).
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