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by Bart » Thu Jul 14, 2005 8:12 pm
This is really good. *but* I think it will be about 10 more parts 'till Byron and Heather will get to the "point", am I right?
The later parts lack a bit of detail (compared to the early ones, like Heather trying to figure out how to put that scanner into the package, wrap the paper etc.), I think. And why is Heather so 'stupid' now ('does.not.compute.')? Well as long as she doesn't say 'YES.MASTER.I.AM.A.ROBOT.BLEEP' it's okay
Keep it coming, you do really light up my boring days at work with this story!
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