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Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)
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The Liar
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Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)
All criticism of my work is both welcome, and encouraged.
My work is uploaded under the Creative Commons Attribution ShareAlike 4.0 license, so as long as attribution is given, feel free to disseminate.
My work is uploaded under the Creative Commons Attribution ShareAlike 4.0 license, so as long as attribution is given, feel free to disseminate.
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zerodin
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Re: Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)
I didn't really feel this series, storywise.
Your designs are getting more ambitious though.
One piece critique I'd offer is maybe dial the facial expressions back a bit, if the software allows.
Your designs are getting more ambitious though.
One piece critique I'd offer is maybe dial the facial expressions back a bit, if the software allows.
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D.Olivaw
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Re: Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)
Contrarily, I really liked the psychological exploration in this piece, both of the fembot and the human, and thought you deftly wove together that element with the erotic content to produce a satisfying story, or at least one I was more intrigued by than your previous outings.
"Men, said the Devil,
are good to their brothers:
they don’t want to mend
their own ways, but each other's"
-Piet Hein
are good to their brothers:
they don’t want to mend
their own ways, but each other's"
-Piet Hein
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The Liar
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Re: Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)
Thank you both, all feedback is appreciated.
All criticism of my work is both welcome, and encouraged.
My work is uploaded under the Creative Commons Attribution ShareAlike 4.0 license, so as long as attribution is given, feel free to disseminate.
My work is uploaded under the Creative Commons Attribution ShareAlike 4.0 license, so as long as attribution is given, feel free to disseminate.
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sfreader
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Re: Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)
Found the story involving.
As for Xavier, he never deserved her anyway.
As for Xavier, he never deserved her anyway.
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