This project mix hundreds of heavy maniped pics, tons of texts, also I put a huge effort into the design, grapics and overall consistency of the project.
More importantly, this project is HUGE, it's a real manual with hundreds of pages and I want it nice, fun, xxxxx, extremely well written, and "realistic"as I want to describe something that may become real in 20 to 25 years and maybe one day, this work could give some inspiration to those who will in the futur build a real CDY.

But the big probleme I have is that I'm french, (I suppose it explain the whining/drama "kube wanna tell you..." thread....) and as a proper french i have a very very average level in english, so average I have the feeling I can't reach by myself the level of writting quality i would like to reach for this project.
This is why I'm asking for help and want to make of this project a collaborative effort.
Every month for 4 to 5 month i will post a part of the project, starting today with the 20 first pages of the manual (there is 60 to 80 pages in total)
Those pages will be those of the "V1" version of the manual (my version done by myself only, with it's strenght and weaknesses).
I ask you to give me honest feedback about what is great and what is not so great and what should be corrected, if some of you feel they have the time, inspiration and motivation to correct or re-write a part of a page, or the totallity of a page, just tell me in this thred and I will post the text content of the page to re-write in this thread.
the result of all this work would be the V2 version of the manual, a collaborative effort, I hope we can work to have this thing for the end of this summer, this is my goal.
I'm counting of each of you !
For the writting work you will find the different chapter of the manual in the story section.
You can find the first part of the manaul here :
http://www.fembotcentral.net/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=13836
You can find some writing materials preview that may need re wrork and improvement
here :
http://www.fembotcentral.net/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=13838
and here :
http://www.fembotcentral.net/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=13839
Don't hesited to post on this thread or MP me if you want to help !