Mirage's stories re-edited

[Spaz]

It is my humble opinion that Mirage is one of the best authors to have ever posted on this forum. His stories ranged from touchy feely domestic scenes to detached, rape stories in foreign environments and from short ministories to multi-part stories. His stories had great detail in all the right places, and he is probably the main influence for the stories I have written. He has also written over 50 stories, more than any other member on this forum by a long shot.

The only problem with his stories is the spelling, grammatical, and punctuation errors, as well as numerous spacing, word order, and missing/extra word issues. After improving my own writing style and building my own confidence in writing, I finally reached out to Mirage and he was happy to give me permission to go back and re-edit all of his stories.

Now, on FembotWiki, you may enjoy all of his stories again, this time completely re-edited. The story and plot details have not been altered at all, all I did was to fix the aforementioned errors.

http://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?tit ... ies/Mirage

Enjoy!

[Devil]

I concur, great work! There are a few stories missing though, like the car crash one?!

[Mirage]

Thank you very much for all my fans like Spaz, Devil, Robotman and many others I wish to mention. Sadly, I myself didn't save any of my own stories from the past. I know on HERF's old website, he had some of my stories archived there, but it am not sure the site even exist anymore. As quoted many times, my stories do suffer for quality, due to my limited time I have. I figured, post it like it is, or take forever fixing it (L). I am glad Spaz offered to fix my stories, as I barely get time for stories anymore. I do have one coming soon, a long one. and it's based on my own storie too...

As a reward to my fans, I want you guys to read my new comic series. It doesn't have any ASFR relations, but I think it's truly my best work I ever did. It's a remake of an old comic series I did 20 years ago. Yes, like any of my stories here, it needs a lot of work after it's done. But just be reminded, it's still being done on my 3DS. I did get myself a Galaxy tablet, but overhaul, I still prefer my 3DS as a drawing tool, the screen is much better than the tab, go figure.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy it, it's still work in progress, as I keep adding pages almost daily. Still a lot of page to go, but I already have past 160 pages (drafts of course)

Please follow the order of the pages, with page one, of course.

http://emmacomics.deviantart.com/galler ... offset=144

Mirage

[Devil]

I have a handful of your stories, and this forum keeps everything for years. I just copied the Car Wreck story to my archives for easier access.

The Wayback Internet machine also has helped me find a bunch of old stories long ago forgotten. Works pretty well!

Which site was HERF's?

Keep up the great work!

[dale coba]

HREF, I believe.

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I know I spent a lot of time at the site, but my memories of old websites has blurred and faded.

- Dale Coba

[Spaz]

I have just finished editing and adapting three of Mirage's stories that were previously deleted, for I'm assuming was underage content.

Spanish Fly Virus
Family Affair
Not Perfect

I have corrected the various language issues in these, but I have also changed some things to remove the underage content problem...most notably in Family Affair.

Enjoy!

[Devil]

I remember Herf's work, I completely forgot about the FA website. I remember the FAC and Noidguy Gallery. Ah that brings back memories.

[Spaz]

Just been delving into Mirage's past posts and have found eleven more stories that were never posted to the wiki.

Missing
Remote Me
Roll with it
Still Rolling
My first and last robotic date
Married to a machine
Testing 1, 2, 3
A breakup and breakdown
Cat out of the bag
Car Crash
My neighbor's wife is sucking my cock

Will re-edit and post them soon...

[Spaz]

Alright, the aforementioned 11 stories have been re-edited and uploaded to the wiki.

I will do the other ten, as well as his newest story, in a couple weeks. I'm just taking a break to unwind with some video games.

I'll also be back with part three of Daydreaming and Spaz Studios Presents: The Uncanny Valley.

[Spaz]

I finally have the remainder of Mirage's stories re-edited and uploaded to the wiki.

[Devil]

That's awesome Spaz. Thank you for all your hard work.

[Mirage]

Thank you so much, guys, you gave me hope and you are the main reasosn I got back at writing here.

Thank you, I really mean it.

PS: I feel so guilty at my bad spelling and writing... time constraint! Sorry! (L)

Mirage

[Devil]

I'm glad our little involvement in your life could produce such a positive response!

It isn't about the spelling or the details. It is about the story.

Carpe Diem