Crazy In The Heat

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Re: Crazy In The Heat

Post by --NightBattery-- » Fri Nov 27, 2015 1:35 am

I really don't know why people assumed her old self was gone and took it as dying thing, but this ending is nice, the other was too,
because you could think whatever you want.
I just hope we didn't forced your hand because of our requests and believes of dead personas.
never write to please any one but yourself >:3

And thanks australopith for being a support player.

thank you both.
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Re: Crazy In The Heat

Post by LongTimeLurker » Sat Nov 28, 2015 11:59 am

Fantastic writing as always, Saya - and I really did like the new ending!
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Re: Crazy In The Heat

Post by Spaz » Thu Dec 03, 2015 6:25 pm

I found this story to be quite inspiring....good work.
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Re: Crazy In The Heat

Post by gynoneko » Sat Mar 26, 2016 11:54 pm

Loved it! Especially the added ending. It added more to the characters, while not explaining too much. Great job!
My heart and soul locked up in a cold steel frame
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