Criticism requested

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Criticism requested

Post by The Liar » Thu Jun 16, 2016 1:27 pm

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Is the glowing triangle too understated?
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Re: Criticism requested

Post by --NightBattery-- » Thu Jun 16, 2016 2:59 pm

Personally I feel the glowy green thing on the choker distune with everything else. But maybe it's only me. But of course, personally I feel my opinion is the most important one.

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Post by darkbutflashy » Thu Jun 16, 2016 3:30 pm

On her forehead? Yes, it's barely visible. And I think it's wrong anyway as with that hairstyle, it should be fully invisible, only the border of her hair should have a glow.
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Re: Criticism requested

Post by --NightBattery-- » Thu Jun 16, 2016 3:34 pm

Personally, I feel the triangle in the forehead is Okay. I can picture it blinking when she is running out of energy or something.

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Re: Criticism requested

Post by The Liar » Thu Jun 16, 2016 3:44 pm

Robotman wrote:I think it's just the right size. I really like the shiny plastic look of the skin... did you do that too?
I turned it that colour but the sheen was inherit to the base image.
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Re: Criticism requested

Post by dieur » Fri Jun 17, 2016 12:15 pm

I think it's one of your best! I've really enjoyed some of your latest line. Lots of imagination fodder.

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Re: Criticism requested

Post by The Liar » Fri Jun 17, 2016 7:43 pm

dieur wrote:I think it's one of your best! I've really enjoyed some of your latest line. Lots of imagination fodder.

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This game
http://hcgc.ru/sei-shoujo-seido/

He's the character set, start of the character.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/693562/fb6e54d9d3/?p=4
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Re: Criticism requested

Post by zerodin » Wed Jun 22, 2016 12:49 am

IMHO she looks less fembot and more corpse.

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