Would you like to give me ideas for something geared towards the visual and textual media?
i am having terribly big difficulties to think in something good for a nsfw comic.
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--NightBattery--
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at first i was thinking in a story of a character creating a fembot for companion but it sounded very boring.
then i thought of something that could involve a fembot and a manbot students but i wasn't capable of thinking in a good scenario and a trigger for nudity and malfunction.
then i thought of a mom-bot that one day malfunctions and shut down in front of her family and when she returns online is a lot of time in the future, her human family is dead and she belongs to a ...somewhat hacker more advanced fembot that is trying to destroy something..but then the image gets hard to follow...and i feel i had to discard that too because it could get very large.
then i thought of something that could involve a fembot and a manbot students but i wasn't capable of thinking in a good scenario and a trigger for nudity and malfunction.
then i thought of a mom-bot that one day malfunctions and shut down in front of her family and when she returns online is a lot of time in the future, her human family is dead and she belongs to a ...somewhat hacker more advanced fembot that is trying to destroy something..but then the image gets hard to follow...and i feel i had to discard that too because it could get very large.
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--NightBattery--
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what was the most time spendig time for you when you created your siren comics?
characters?
creating a satisfactory ending?
a satisfactory beginning?
you had the bionic woman and some othere similar 70-80 references as a backbone isn't?
i don't have anything like that, it has been a while since i was fan of something with robots on it.
characters?
creating a satisfactory ending?
a satisfactory beginning?
you had the bionic woman and some othere similar 70-80 references as a backbone isn't?
i don't have anything like that, it has been a while since i was fan of something with robots on it.
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--NightBattery--
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how about...
A free will robot girl...that is sold by another robot girl and after a while the robot girl recovers her autonomy, escapes her owner and looks in many places for the other robot girl that sold her to settle the score!
how you like that?
A free will robot girl...that is sold by another robot girl and after a while the robot girl recovers her autonomy, escapes her owner and looks in many places for the other robot girl that sold her to settle the score!
how you like that?
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Okay, this is the premise…
for the first act:
the robot girl that will play the part of the lamb is going to be the busty black haired android I have drawn in the past, she is going to be her own man…woman, we will see her first working at a night's club as a slowly rising Disk jockey, some past sequences will be shown to exemplify the struggles she faced to finally become an independent machine (no idea yet) and that she is now happy, as she now has friends, her own place, her own pet and some commodities. As the night dies just when leaving she receives a request to play at a luxurious place by some rich person, meaning she is starting to become an important DJ despite her nature.
she is trilled, she takes a subway to her place, as she returns home a little of the streets of the imaginary city will be shown, perhaps some locations that will be used eventually. Inside her house she will greet her pet, take out a little of her clothing to reveal a tank top but then she will find another robot girl taking a shower on her bath (maybe, i don't know what could be cooler), this robot girl (let’s call her…Java) will be brown skinned and brown haired and will override the other robot girl (let’s call her…Random) and after a little talking she will force a panicked Random to shut up and to give her some cunnilingus, while being a little evil, a more controlled Random will be impressed that her assailant is scented down there, lowing the tension of that scene, Java is not going to like this comment and might turn Random off, then things get confusing, as Random is not capable of registering all what is happening, she comes to herself now on java’s crib where she is going to be shown missing her limbs and naked and filled with plugs everywhere, Java will be eating an instant noodle soup or something while paying attention to a screen, some talking will happen again, then a guy will knock at java’s and they’ll kiss as he gives her some short of future USB looking thing with some updates for Java as she tells Random that not being able to trust your manufacturer is the burden of being an illegal android (or something like that) then they will make out in front of the limbless android as the mind of Random is being rewritten.
Some more confusing images will be shown as Random is being sold to a fat guy in a gypsy manner, her eyes will be empty and maybe some past sequences of the life of Random will be shown, perhaps a happy memory, then she will be shown serving this guy that is going to be a stereotypical lonely nerd that doesn't actually do anything smart, Random will be shown serving this guy as she is now an obedient automata (perhaps inside she is still herself but can’t control her actions) some sex with the fat guy will be shown as he exploits Random in many ways, he will fall in love with the uncomplaining robot and tell her his aspirations, dreams and sadness, then one day Random will hear one of her songs and she will be restored to herself as the fat guy tells her some unimportant things and he will get shocked when Random starts to speak and then she will punch him, get dressed and get out of there and see what has been of her life.
Ends ACT 1
Something i could do to enhace this act?
for the first act:
the robot girl that will play the part of the lamb is going to be the busty black haired android I have drawn in the past, she is going to be her own man…woman, we will see her first working at a night's club as a slowly rising Disk jockey, some past sequences will be shown to exemplify the struggles she faced to finally become an independent machine (no idea yet) and that she is now happy, as she now has friends, her own place, her own pet and some commodities. As the night dies just when leaving she receives a request to play at a luxurious place by some rich person, meaning she is starting to become an important DJ despite her nature.
she is trilled, she takes a subway to her place, as she returns home a little of the streets of the imaginary city will be shown, perhaps some locations that will be used eventually. Inside her house she will greet her pet, take out a little of her clothing to reveal a tank top but then she will find another robot girl taking a shower on her bath (maybe, i don't know what could be cooler), this robot girl (let’s call her…Java) will be brown skinned and brown haired and will override the other robot girl (let’s call her…Random) and after a little talking she will force a panicked Random to shut up and to give her some cunnilingus, while being a little evil, a more controlled Random will be impressed that her assailant is scented down there, lowing the tension of that scene, Java is not going to like this comment and might turn Random off, then things get confusing, as Random is not capable of registering all what is happening, she comes to herself now on java’s crib where she is going to be shown missing her limbs and naked and filled with plugs everywhere, Java will be eating an instant noodle soup or something while paying attention to a screen, some talking will happen again, then a guy will knock at java’s and they’ll kiss as he gives her some short of future USB looking thing with some updates for Java as she tells Random that not being able to trust your manufacturer is the burden of being an illegal android (or something like that) then they will make out in front of the limbless android as the mind of Random is being rewritten.
Some more confusing images will be shown as Random is being sold to a fat guy in a gypsy manner, her eyes will be empty and maybe some past sequences of the life of Random will be shown, perhaps a happy memory, then she will be shown serving this guy that is going to be a stereotypical lonely nerd that doesn't actually do anything smart, Random will be shown serving this guy as she is now an obedient automata (perhaps inside she is still herself but can’t control her actions) some sex with the fat guy will be shown as he exploits Random in many ways, he will fall in love with the uncomplaining robot and tell her his aspirations, dreams and sadness, then one day Random will hear one of her songs and she will be restored to herself as the fat guy tells her some unimportant things and he will get shocked when Random starts to speak and then she will punch him, get dressed and get out of there and see what has been of her life.
Ends ACT 1
Something i could do to enhace this act?
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Re: listening post
Well unless you're planning for the nerd to come back as a good guy that in the end helps saving the day, don't get too soapy on him. He's not the mastermind, so we don't need to know or care much about him, except showing how crap Random's life was. He's a tool, quite litterally.
Also DJing and composing electronic music are two different things, although the two often collide.
Also DJing and composing electronic music are two different things, although the two often collide.
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heheh, yeah, since he is a redeemable character he could be useful for another act, maybe as a secondary "villian" or as a deus ex machina when everything gets crappy again...or maybe not.
Maybe there could be...mmh a human girl looking for him but he doesn't notice her and...mmmh... eventually after chasing Random for a while they get toghether and he leaves Random alone? but yeah, he is just a tool not meant to be important for the main plot.
how about that?
Maybe there could be...mmh a human girl looking for him but he doesn't notice her and...mmmh... eventually after chasing Random for a while they get toghether and he leaves Random alone? but yeah, he is just a tool not meant to be important for the main plot.
how about that?
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now i feel the need of creating buildings for the story....this will be slower than what i thought.
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now i am looking to make some short of lyric for the song.... suggestions are welcome.
oh, never mind, i got something.
oh, never mind, i got something.
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