Kelly & Trent

[forenuser]

Hi there!

As some may already know i published my first, hopefully ongoing series of short stories on fembotwiki, named "Kelly & Trent".
I am not yet fully familiar with the policies of fembotcentral and i do not want to spam this board with each single act of my stories i just paste a link to my fembotwiki Story-page:

https://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?ti ... _%26_Trent

I hope i eliminated the most and worst typos but i am afraid i failed... And for sure my english grammar is not worth mentioning it. And finally i am totaly aware having issues with my story telling, specially when... ahhh... the action... is happening.

Having said this, i would really appreciate any critics, may it be positive or negative.

Thanks for your patience!

With kind regards
forenuser



Edit: New link after re-organizing the chapters on fembotwiki

[forenuser]

Hi there!

Finally i made and (hopefully) completed "Act 5: Sleep(h)er good Frie(n)d".

Act 5 was difficult. I had ideas where i want to go, but that did not work out at all. And so i changed it over and over again, specialy from the part on Kelly entered room three on floor one.
But now i am happy with the result. Ahh.. With the story. There will be ongoing changes to eleminate Typos and my *cough* english grammar *cough*, as soon as i am aware of the made mistakesd. But the Act as as such... done!

And i added Act 5.1. It's obviously an addtion to Act 5 but i think a too big change to the original for just adding it. But also too small and the story too close to Act 5 as to label it as Act 6.


I hope you enjoy Kelly & Trent and i would apprciate any positive and negative critics!


With kind regards
forenuser

[frou]

Thank you, that's a fantastic work!