Writing As We Go: Book 2, Chapters 9 - 15

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Writing As We Go: Book 2, Chapters 9 - 15

Post by DukeNukem 2417 » Wed Jun 26, 2024 1:13 pm

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qF3L0V ... drive_link

Yes, it's more of that ongoing semi-Lynchian work that I'm STILL NOT DONE WRITING. This time, I have a few content warnings before you dive in:

Book 2, Chapter 9: graphic descriptions of gynoid-on-human violence (multiple instances)
Book 2, Chapter 12: interrogation and torture of a human character; “off-screen” murder of a human character by a gynoid (a NonSen gynoid hears the attack but does nothing to intervene); unintentional vehicular homicide with descriptions of the aftermath
Book 2, Chapter 14: description of a brutal attack on a character at the hands of another [past-tense]; a main gynoid character describes her fear of her entire self being erased (possible derealization trigger)
Book 2, Chapter 15: brutal interrogation and torture of a human character, psychological manipulation of one character by another

But other than that, smooth sailing. Enjoy! :mrgreen:
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Re: Writing As We Go: Book 2, Chapters 9 - 15

Post by BA2 » Fri Jun 28, 2024 2:09 pm

Wow, great to see you continuing this, and with a huge update!

I really enjoyed how you’ve developed this story to explore a variety of fembot themes in the same arc. The character considerations have great depth on a range of themes including human uploads, designed and emergent synthetic sentience, human real, basic models, reprogramming, maintenance and so much more. All tied together with a good story line, a great read - thanks for sharing!

FYI - the link above needs access granting to the Google drive (at least for me) but the links you posted on Discord go straight through…

Looking forward to the next chapters!

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Re: Writing As We Go: Book 2, Chapters 9 - 15

Post by DukeNukem 2417 » Sat Jun 29, 2024 6:08 am

Link-sharing has been updated so that anyone with the link can open and view the file. If need be, refresh the link until you're able to extract it.

And thanks for the compliments. I've always held the belief that there's more to ASFR fiction than just the SF (not that there's anything wrong with that), and with this, I've been digging just a bit deeper into those themes with each new bit. Fun times.
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