Looking for Critique Again

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Looking for Critique Again

Post by The Liar » Tue Jun 17, 2014 5:08 pm

I've been attempting to increase the utility of some scenes by replacing the backgrounds with thematic backdrops, and while I've found a lovely pink sparkly backdrop that works fine, it gives a "dreamy romance" tone and context to the picture.

I was wondering if I could have an option on how well the following backdrops work when aiming for a more "Executing Program" feel.

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Re: Looking for Critique Again

Post by --NightBattery-- » Tue Jun 17, 2014 5:44 pm

Blue looks like an upgrade because it's vertical, like a waterfall.
the green one looks like a running train, maybe you could use that one, but i think the one you show here needs more numbers to give the feeling a big processing is happening.
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Re: Looking for Critique Again

Post by dale coba » Tue Jun 17, 2014 7:06 pm

--Battery-- wrote:the green one looks like a running train
It makes a stronger contrast with the bright foreground figures.

If there was supposed to be any space between their bodies, a darker background would show that better also.

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Re: Looking for Critique Again

Post by liliwinnt6 » Sun Jun 29, 2014 3:51 am

How about going for the matrix style? Vertical, green code and black background.
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