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Does anything seem off about the following image?

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Looking for critique

Post by The Liar » Sat Jan 03, 2015 6:50 pm

Does anything seem off about the following image? (Please be sure you have seen full image before voting.)

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Re: Looking for critique

Post by petey » Tue Jan 06, 2015 9:59 pm

Yeah, the inset is placed in such a way that it takes an extra moment to realize there is an inset and the head isn't just pasted onto the image too far down.
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Re: Looking for critique

Post by zerodin » Tue Jan 06, 2015 11:27 pm

Yeah, the juxtapositioning is just really weird.
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Re: Looking for critique

Post by dale coba » Wed Jan 07, 2015 5:50 am

Lines of
0000000000000000000000000000000000
0000000000000000000000000000000000
0000000000000000000000000000000000
are not useful binary code.

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Re: Looking for critique

Post by shutdown » Wed Jan 07, 2015 7:50 am

What if you put the green or blue background in her eyes so it looks like she's processing something?
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Re: Looking for critique

Post by The Liar » Wed Jan 07, 2015 9:07 am

dale coba wrote:Lines of
0000000000000000000000000000000000
0000000000000000000000000000000000
0000000000000000000000000000000000
are not useful binary code.

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I assume you're referring to the small oooo's; that's circuit board not binary code.

I liked character design's and sprites, but the event images were rather limiting and this attempt to expand their utility was less then successful.

I'm abandoning this image set.
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Re: Looking for critique

Post by dale coba » Wed Jan 07, 2015 10:30 am

Oh, breadboard holes - right.
That makes more sense.

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Re: Looking for critique

Post by darkbutflashy » Wed Jan 07, 2015 12:36 pm

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