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Looking for Critique

Post by The Liar » Mon Jun 09, 2014 7:25 am

Experimenting with some new designs, wondering if I could get an option on it. Especially the choker.
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Re: Looking for Critique

Post by darkbutflashy » Mon Jun 09, 2014 8:47 am

If you specifically ask for the choker, I'd say, make it broader, two lines of LEDs, a small notch between them. So it could be a place where her head can be separated from her body. And make two or three LEDs much brighter than the others. Maybe even a flare effect.
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Re: Looking for Critique

Post by The Liar » Mon Jun 09, 2014 11:53 am

Better?
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Re: Looking for Critique

Post by darkbutflashy » Mon Jun 09, 2014 12:09 pm

Great, great, great! :applause:
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Re: Looking for Critique

Post by Mirage » Mon Jun 09, 2014 4:17 pm

very nice, I would maybe put a seem on her thorax, going up (each side of her body) to her armpit to her pelvis.
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Re: Looking for Critique

Post by The Liar » Mon Jun 09, 2014 5:43 pm

Something like this?
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Re: Looking for Critique

Post by liliwinnt6 » Fri Jun 13, 2014 8:22 am

Uhm... May I say that chin / jaw is too sharp? I prefer some rounder chin.
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Re: Looking for Critique

Post by Mirage » Fri Jun 13, 2014 1:44 pm

looking very good.
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