The Phantom of the Factory:part 1

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The Phantom of the Factory:part 1

Post by RancidInsanity » Thu Mar 06, 2008 3:59 pm

Eric Rift was once an ordinary factory worker. The factory at which Eric was employed at was producing Robots for Ruman Industries. However one day, a new machine was installed at the factory, a machine that automatically programmed the robots. A tragic accident soon occurred.

It was lunch-break at the factory on a Thursday afternoon. Eric Rift waved to a co-worker as he tiredly walked to his lunch that was awaiting his arrival in his work locker. Then the event that would change Eric forever happened, he slipped on some oil on the floor, and landed face-up and the assembly line heading straight for the new programming machine. Fear seized every inch of Eric’s mind as he quickly tried to get up, put it was just simply to late.

The newly installed automatic programming machine creating a bloody and horrid mess as it cut into Eric’s skull. The screams of agony that issued from Eric where soon muted as nearly his entire brain was removed. Only about one-sixth of his brain remained and the other five-sixths were soon replaced with machinery. Eric’s face was also severely damaged and now deformed. Eric was technically dead at this point.

The next thing Eric knew he saw red letters and numbers making up thousands of codes, sprinting across his shut eyelids. When he opened his eyes he saw a doctor and a nurse to perfect to be human, she was a robotic nurse.

“Oh good you’re coming around….” The Doctor said.

“Shall I fetch the mirror, Doctor?” the robotic nurse asked

“I hoped this time would never come….yes, Nurse, fetch the mirror.” Said the doctor reluctantly

“What? What happened?” Eric asked highly frightened

“Don’t worry Mr. Rift, You were in a horrible factory accident. It is my job to inform you that you are now a cyborg, a cybernetic organism. You were programmed to be an assistant for the blind, but we’ve re-programmed you to have free will….However, due to the machinery now connected to what’s left of your brain….we weren’t able to restore your face….I’m sorry Mr. Rift.” Answered the Doctor

“Here’s the mirror Doctor.” The robotic nurse said in a monotone voice

When Eric saw the hideous demon that stared back at him it drove the fraction of his brain to insanity. Eric leaped out of the hospital bed and ran down the hall. His destination was the Ruman Robot Factory.
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Post by blake_sigma » Fri Mar 07, 2008 6:17 am

woooo (whistle sound)

That was heavy. NICE START! :shock:

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