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How many of you want to see "the First time" conti

Post by Mirage » Mon Sep 26, 2005 6:27 pm

How many of you want to see "the First time" continue more?

Just wondering how many more chapters I should do more?

I still have many ideals (and twists) to where it's going, but I am afraid of you guys getting bored with it...

I think this is my longest tale yet...

You rather see me finish this one soon and I jump on a new story or I continue with it for a while with it, at least another 5-7 chapters?

Please tell me what you think.

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Post by Devil » Mon Sep 26, 2005 7:11 pm

I'm in anticipation for every new chapter. So many ways it could go, so many twists and turns. I vote to keep it going! It is an amazing story.

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Post by General » Mon Sep 26, 2005 7:17 pm

I am also looking forward to more

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kepp up the good work

Post by castaliaman » Mon Sep 26, 2005 7:22 pm

I love the story and look forward to each chapter.

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Post by Bigcoyote » Mon Sep 26, 2005 7:27 pm

Great job, keep up the good work!! Can't wait to see how it ends!

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Post by 1001011001 » Mon Sep 26, 2005 7:33 pm

bunch them up instead of small bits and pieces. I'm a patient man.

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Post by Orion987 » Mon Sep 26, 2005 9:52 pm

Please keep it going, it's been a good read and interesting to see a longer story from you.

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Post by A.N.N. » Mon Sep 26, 2005 10:13 pm

Keep them coming Mirage! I look forward to reading this story's chapter every weekend!
A.N.N.

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Post by Brytestar » Mon Sep 26, 2005 10:25 pm

Keep it going maybe the jealous girlfriend can get reprogrammed or something.

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Post by DollSpace » Mon Sep 26, 2005 11:03 pm

I love reading this story and I hope you continue it ^^ You've already given me lots of ideas for stories with your writings; I just wish I had the motivation or focus to write. ^^;

Can't wait to see more! ^^
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hmmmmmm

Post by psychojester1978 » Tue Sep 27, 2005 2:04 am

hmmmm...fembots dreaming...fembots having fantasies....real girl jealous of artificial girl.....yeah go for it


who knows....maybe Rachel is really a rebellious android that the dr once created, who even she doesn't know that she is an android...hmmmm

maybe, Allison has a lesbian encounter with Rachel...hmmmmm

maybe.....just maybe.....Steve decides that he needs to part of Allison's world and become an android, too.....hmmmmmm

Mirage....you make this story sound more and more interesting....keep it coming

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Post by ratbot » Tue Sep 27, 2005 10:31 am

i've lost interest in this after the fifth chapter, so you're welcome to end it and get on some other project 8)

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Post by tc » Tue Sep 27, 2005 2:40 pm

I would like to see how the story ends.

If that is one or 7 more chapters.

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Post by ehy » Tue Sep 27, 2005 2:51 pm

I'm enjoying it.

I would enjoy it even more if you took a little more time to grammar-check and spell-check - the runon paragraphs make it a little difficult for me to read, for example - but I can understand if that's not something you want to do, writing for fun and all.

But, y'know, write it because it's fun to write, not because we want it.

EHY

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Post by crimsondragon1982 » Tue Sep 27, 2005 5:15 pm

i'm also very interested with thios story. maybe you shoud try to send it to LTBSA. it could use a fresh new story for us ASFRians.

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Post by Gyn » Tue Sep 27, 2005 8:08 pm

Great history keep going please :D

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Post by htb21 » Tue Sep 27, 2005 9:46 pm

no sign of loosing interest here keep it up mirage! 8)
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