The Mission Part 23 - The Big Day, Part 2

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Post by fection » Wed Mar 23, 2005 5:20 am

Brilliant!
When Rochelle took her face mask off and said 'I love you because I am a robot' I nearly laughed out loud. Build us up to thinking Robot Control couldn't get anything wrong, then WHAM! How you come up with it so quickly, I don't know! Nice one.
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Post by 1001011001 » Wed Mar 23, 2005 4:04 pm

That's quite the twist that I don't think even Mirage saw coming.
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