Rochelle's Visit

Korby · Post by **Korby** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:13 am

Hmmm... wel, you've got my interest. If you come up with more, I'm all for seeing it.

kb7rky · Post by **kb7rky** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 10:22 am

Pretty good, though I got a bit lost somewhere in the middle.

Would love to see more, nevertheless

Doug

keraptis · Post by **keraptis** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 3:04 pm

Great stuff. I have to say, the image that really stood out for me was where Rochelle's voice comes from "her speaker" after her face is removed. That image of the slightly different-sounding voice, detached completely from a moving mouth, seemed to me a pretty novel idea in ASFR stories like these. I don't think I've seen that described quite that way before. I'm not sure if this was your intention, but I found it even more exciting to imagine the speaker being housed in her chest. Because after all, if her head is removed, doesn't she still have to be able to run diagnostics and report status and such? I'd love to see that idea explored a bit more.

Alternatively it would be cool to see one robot being used as a "mouthpiece" by another robot or by a computer system. In other words, what if when Maria wanted to talk to Laurie, she just pressed a button inside Rochelle and heard Laurie's voice coming out of her chest speaker! I've always been strangely fascinated with the idea of a fembot housing a TV/radio/walkie-talkie in her belly. Don't ask why!

Anyway, great stuff ... please keep it coming!

kb7rky · Post by **kb7rky** » Fri Dec 31, 2004 11:31 am

robotman wrote:Hey Doug, let me know where you got lost & I'll try & 'splain it a little more clearly.

I went back through it and re-read it...it's all good now. I was just a little confused by some of the visual desriptions.

Thanks for the offer, though

Doug (92 and counting...)

BA · Post by BA » Sun Jan 02, 2005 8:56 am

I really like this: lots of ice-cold fembot action!

BA

ehy · Post by **ehy** » Sun Jan 02, 2005 11:11 am

You wouldn't happen to be thinking of the city of New Rochelle, NY, are you?

Nah, of course not...

Nice story.

Rochelle's Visit

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