Where are you, Lovely? Part 1 (Revised)

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Where are you, Lovely? Part 1 (Revised)

Post by blake_sigma » Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:46 pm

Good Afternoon, My Fellow Fembot Fans

After countless times going back and forth on gathering enough courage to write a story (my writing skills are so-so), I finally decided to do one. Please give me your honest opinion (and reaction).

Thanks

Where are you, Lovely?

By Blake Sigma



My life was pretty basic and simple.
My own home, a good car, a great job, even greater friends from both sides of the sexes, and the most wonderful and most perfect girlfriend a man can have. But all that led to a strange event that changed my present life, forever!!

It all started with my girlfriend (whom I am still with, but we'll get to that part down the row). Her name is Lovely and boy she was the total package. Beautiful face. Brains and Manners. Smooth chocolate brown skin (I use to joke about her name and call her "Dark & Lovely". She got a laugh or two out of it). And an amazing body. She had a body that made most men snap their necks (and most women slit their wrist). She was (and is) the best thing that ever happened to me. She was always nice to my friends, and never got angry or jealous when I hung out with the boys at the nudie bars. And the sex. Wooooo!!! She left nothing untouched (except for S&M, I don't dig that stuff). Lovely was the perfect woman.

Then there was her roommate, Tanya. A looker in every way, but she had an attitude and was not a people person. At times when I stayed over Lovely's crib, I would notice Tanya giving her that evil, jealous look and sometimes tried to flirt with me, often feeling me up behind Lovely's back. Sometimes she would answer the phone and try to have a nosy, intimate conversation, and tell me Lovely is not in the house, when I know she is there. But I didn't sweat that, because me and Lovely were a pair that understood each others need. We virtually never had a disagreement, until one day, she called me late at night while I was chilling with my co-workers at the local gentlemens club.

"I can't believe you're there with those whores!" she yelled out angrily, but strangely unlike her.

"Baby, what's wrong. I always come here with the fella's afterwork." I replied back, "You know I never do anything with the girls here. I only watch."

"We'll, I don't like that. I never liked it. In fact, I don't think I like you anymore after what Tanya told me about you." she said, still not sounding like the Lovely I know. "How could you touch her?"

"What?? I never touched her. She always touches me" I snapped back.

"Oh, is that what it is?" "We'll you and Tanya can have a great time together, because you would never see me again." she responded with the same strange tone in her voice.

" As a matter of fact, I'm leaving the US for Paris right now and going back to modelling, where I belonged long before I met you. Goodbye."

<CLICK>

I couldn't believe this. This morning we was laughing and kissing, looking like the perfect couple. Then next thing you know, my girl is calling me to break-up our happy relationship. I tried calling her back to agologize or something, but she wouldn't pick-up. After many call backs and messages left, the final call ended up with a message stating the phone was disconnected. That was the last straw. I couldn't think straight, so I walked towards the bar and downed as many drinks as my budget can handle (which was alot). I could not stop thinking about what just had transpired and looking at the beautiful naked women just made it worst. After my boys stopped me from drinking myself unconscious, I had one of them drop me off near my girls home. Shit faced drunk and wobbling, I made it to my girls door and knocked as hard as I could. The door opened up to reveal Tanya wearing nothing but a pair of tight gym shorts and a skimpy tank-top.

"Where'ssLovely? IsSheHeere?" I mumbled out intoxicated.

"She's gone. Already left for Paris." Tanya spoke back.

Devastated, I started to cry. I didn't want to believe that I've lost the one good thing in my life in just a snap. If not for the fact that Tanya caught me, I would've fell to the floor face first from lack of concentration in my balance. She held me and started to walk towards me towards the living room.

"Idon'tuunderstand!" I blurted out. "Ididn'tdo nnothing wrong. Howcould I have fuckedup likethiss." I continued as Tanya moved me on the couch.

"Ah, thats OK. She wasn't right for." Tanya said in a low sexy voice. "She didn't want you the way I did."

When I heard Tanya said that, I began to look her deep in her eyes. She began to follow suit. Before you know it, we began kissing like animals. Next thing you know, Tanya pushed me away from her, and started to slowly strip right before my eyes. I could not believe me. I've always (slightly) imagine seeing Tanya in the nude, but never like this. Her body was even more amazing, without clothes. Then , when there was no more articles to remove, she began to remove my pants, followed by my boxers and started to play with my package uninhibited. I sat there, still trying to gather the event that was accuring right before my eyes. I began to move my arms and hands towards her head to get a better feeling of her oral escapades, but Tanya quickly whipped my hands back on the couch and kept on giving me the best head I had ever had. Even better than Lovely, as sad for me to admit. Then when I thought I was going to explode, she stopped and started to move her body closer to mine. The closer she got, the more beautiful I saw her breast to be. The nipples were a perfect chocolate brown circle, which blended with her light honey skin, blemish free I might add. I was overwhelmed by mouth watering desires and gave into my animal instincts, licking and softly biting her small pert daggers, circling my tongue over every dark spot. 'This feels great ' I told myself as I began squeezing on her well-toned buttocks and caressing her large soft breast. Tanya was loving every minute of it. My hands began to make its way towards the front of her and began rubbing her smooth, hairless pussy. At one moment, I could have sworn it felt just like I was touching Lovely's special area, but I didn't pay it no mind, due to the high levels of alcohol and hormones I was feeling. Tanya mouned as I began to finger her wet spot. After caressing and feeling nearly every ounce of Tanya's wonderful figure, she moved my hand away from her love hole and began to insert my hardened member inside her. Both of use let out sounds of adult pleasure at the same time. She began to ride me slowly for the first couple of minutes, and then picked up the pace a little before she moved her body to position me on top. That went on for about several long minutes.

Before I could even prep my self for a final release, Tanya stopped me again, but this time, grabbing my manhood and directing it towards her other opening.

"I bet you Lovely never let you fuck her in ass, huh?." Tanya shot out aggressively. "We'll I'm not like that bitch, so you can fuck me hard and good, and I won't stop you."

Who am I to turn down a ladies request, especially in this condition. So off we went. My entire penis was balls deep in her anus, and I was enjoing every minute of this. Don't get me wrong, Lovely let me play with it a time or two, but we never had intercourse, at least, not the way I could have imagine it to be, not like this. So here I am, pounding away on Tanya's exit region, each thrust forcing her to scream uncontrollably. Then all of sudden I felt Tanya's body twitch. If not for the fact that I felt a little shock on my lower buddy, I would have thought that she had an orgasm and paid it no mind. But it happened again, this time I heard loud sparking sound, along with an even bigger shock to my manhood. The pain was so great that I yanked myself off and out of Tanya, only to witness something I never expected, in any lifetime.


See you at Part Two (Still working on the Story) 8) :? :?

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Post by tc » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:35 pm

interesting start. cannot wait for chapter 2

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Post by tectile » Fri Sep 17, 2004 5:34 am

Hmmm, Seems like someone has been taking writing lessons from our old buddy Mirage. :)

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Post by rs5420 » Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:22 pm

OoooH!!! :shock: This is the kind i like in every way!!! 8)

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