Writing As We Go - Book 2, Chapters 19 and 20

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Writing As We Go - Book 2, Chapters 19 and 20

Post by DukeNukem 2417 » Wed Dec 04, 2024 2:13 pm

I was going to wait until I finished Book 2 in its entirety, but I figured that it'd be nice for all you wonderful people to get a glimpse at two of the closing three chapters, so here they are. Enjoy!

Content Warnings for harsh language, 'bot on 'bot violence, grievous injury to a human character and a gratuitous reference to The Most Mysterious Song on the Internet (written after it was identified :mrgreen: )

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1j3a0jG ... sp=sharing

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1I1Qaph ... sp=sharing
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Re: Writing As We Go - Book 2, Chapters 19 and 20

Post by DukeNukem 2417 » Wed Dec 18, 2024 7:09 am

...so, I wasn't happy with how the ending of Chapter 20 turned out. That, and it turns out I'd copied a page from earlier in the chapter, so there's a duplicate page in there. At any rate, I've gone back and redone the final few bits of the chapter. THIS is the canon Chapter 20; the only difference between this and the earlier one is the new ending, so...yeah. Enjoy! :mrgreen:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HlaPph ... sp=sharing
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