Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

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Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by The Liar » Mon Aug 24, 2020 1:38 pm

The mostly unscored beta of the first part of that visual novel I'm making; all criticism is welcome, and it would be appreciated if any obvious mistakes were reported. https://mega.nz/file/vqAymSCS#Wm7pzdLUE ... raOw9AVzYo
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Re: Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by The Liar » Mon Aug 24, 2020 5:15 pm

I appears I had accidentally failed to include a vital component the first time I upload this, this one should work. https://mega.nz/file/fnQCgaSY#x-aIYfn42 ... 5XXl9lMdRA
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Re: Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by The Liar » Mon Aug 24, 2020 7:44 pm

This version fixed a few issues from the last build.
https://mega.nz/file/nrR2WSgJ#zypTc6q8n ... 4De5qc53vk
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Re: Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by KinoLangDanzel » Wed Aug 26, 2020 10:47 pm

Nice work, Liar. This was really well made.
So far during my playthroughs I haven't encountered any problem and the story so far is good.
Can't wait to see more in the future. :thumbsup:
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Re: Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by The Liar » Thu Aug 27, 2020 5:00 am

Thank you, your feedback is appreciated.
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Re: Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by dingdongdug » Thu Aug 27, 2020 12:27 pm

Hi, how can I read it , at each time I try to open it , my computer froze?
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Re: Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by The Liar » Thu Aug 27, 2020 12:38 pm

dingdongdug wrote: ↑Thu Aug 27, 2020 12:27 pm Hi, how can I read it , at each time I try to open it , my computer froze?
I'd kinda need specific details to help, but you should beable to just unzip the folder, then click on the .exe to get it to work; I have no idea why it would be freezing. (Note this is a Windows application, so if you're using a different OS, you probably won't be able to use it.)
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Re: Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by dingdongdug » Thu Aug 27, 2020 12:47 pm

Ok , thanks , I use win10 pro
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Re: Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by The Liar » Thu Aug 27, 2020 12:57 pm

dingdongdug wrote: ↑Thu Aug 27, 2020 12:47 pm Ok , thanks , I use win10 pro
Okay, I use windows 8 and Novelty is an older application (2008 last updated 2010) so I'm not sure how well it works on 10, see if you can run it using the compatibility mode for earlier Windows versions.
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Re: Reclamaiden: Visual novel Beta (first part)

Post by dingdongdug » Fri Aug 28, 2020 10:23 am

Hi , I can open it on COMMODO container , I think , it may be considerate like danger by some program

So , really good work :notworthy: :notworthy: :notworthy: :notworthy: , I hop the next come soon
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