Robocadet Mika: Training

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Robocadet Mika: Training

Post by The Liar » Tue Nov 05, 2019 1:07 pm

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Well this got meandering, future installments will hopefully be more tightly written.

Will likely be focusing on finishing Bad Romance for the immediate future though.
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Re: Robocadet Mika: Training

Post by The Liar » Wed Nov 06, 2019 6:10 am

I'm not 100% sure on how well this installment works, so I would like to fish for some feedback.
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Re: Robocadet Mika: Training

Post by Extyr » Wed Nov 06, 2019 10:05 pm

It wasn't as confusing as you made it sound. I had no trouble with it. It's just a bit depressing.

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Re: Robocadet Mika: Training

Post by The Liar » Thu Nov 07, 2019 6:04 am

Extyr wrote:
Wed Nov 06, 2019 10:05 pm
It wasn't as confusing as you made it sound. I had no trouble with it. It's just a bit depressing.
Thank you.

Your feedback is most appreciated; of the things I was worried about, it actually hadn't occurred to me that this installment might be viewed as overly depressing... I was worried about future ones, but I totally see it now that you bring it up.
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