Story find sort of.

tectile · Post by **tectile** » Sat Nov 29, 2003 1:15 pm

Found this while story hunting on the web.
I don't want to sound too critical since my writing output is practily nill but it's hard to believe this guy is any sort of reporter.

What do you think?

http://www.aphelion-webzine.com/shorts/ ... meBack.htm

tectile · Post by **tectile** » Sat Nov 29, 2003 1:56 pm

A much better story from the same site.

http://www.aphelion-webzine.com/shorts/ ... ilroad.htm

Stephaniebot · Post by **Stephaniebot** » Sun Nov 30, 2003 3:03 am

Yes I must agree with your sentiments concerning the 1st story,I too find it hard to believe he is a reporter as well.The second one is a bit better I must say,though I would be inclined to say I have read a lot better at www.mcstories.com including something which is 1 of my favourites written by someone who is a member of this site,and is indeed the reason I found this site in the first place.(The Offer parts 2 and 3 perhaps!)
I have written a lot of stories myself at this site,and would like to think that at least most of mine were better than these,but thats not for me to say.
Still its always nice to read someone elses work,and see what line and style they are taking,so thanks for posting the link.
Stephanie.

tectile · Post by **tectile** » Mon Dec 01, 2003 6:18 am

I did a quick scan through all the back issues of the Ezine and didn't see anything else of interest to this group. Looks like there mite be some good sscifi/horor stories there though.

If someone wants to check out the rest of the archive, here's the link.

http://www.aphelion-webzine.com/backnos.htm

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