Temptation (comic... Kinda)
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Temptation (comic... Kinda)
Not really happy with this one, the ending seems to fall flat, but I had finished it, so what the hell.
All criticism of my work is both welcome, and encouraged.
My work is uploaded under the Creative Commons Attribution ShareAlike 4.0 license, so as long as attribution is given, feel free to disseminate.
My work is uploaded under the Creative Commons Attribution ShareAlike 4.0 license, so as long as attribution is given, feel free to disseminate.
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Re: Temptation (comic... Kinda)
flat?
I think it's pretty okay.
maybe if you had let the "funny" panel for last it would have ended in a higher tone.
but hey, Mission accomplished no? one more for the out tray.
Thanks for sharing.
I think it's pretty okay.
maybe if you had let the "funny" panel for last it would have ended in a higher tone.
but hey, Mission accomplished no? one more for the out tray.
Thanks for sharing.
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