Constructive Criticism Thread

[D.Olivaw]

Hello FembotCentral denizens,

Looking over my stories, I feel kind of disappointed in them. It feels like they're missing something I can't quite put my finger on, some je ne sais quoi that would take them from merely okay to good. Since I can't put my finger on it, I was wondering if the community could help me out by suggesting things that you think should be improved and how. Feel free to comment on any aspect of the stories I've written that you feel is sub-par or doesn't appeal to you (and don't beat around the bush either - I have thick skin). Obviously tastes differ so there will be some measure of disagreement, but I think I can learn a lot by listening to readers. Perhaps I can even tailor different stories mores specifically to different tastes as my current approach is rather scattershot.

Thanks

[BA2]

I clicked 'other': the only improvement I'd like to see is quantitative - ie more of your stories!

I find your imagination and pace is perfect to stimulate the imagination and generate characters and plot without overwhelming the reader with too much depth. Sometimes less is more, especially if the 'less' is really good stuff like yours.

All the best for the upcoming...!

[D.Olivaw]

Thank you for the compliment and kind wishes, BA2.

[D.Olivaw]

Woo-hoo, the feedback train is rolling out of the station!

So, the consensus seems to be that my malfunction scenes need to be improved. Anyone have some specific pointers on what needs to be fixed? Any ideas on how?

[Condor621]

There arre many great stories here, but yours are my favorites!

Looking forward to more if we're fortunate.

[33cl33]

Woo-hoo, the feedback train is rolling out of the station!

So, the consensus seems to be that my malfunction scenes need to be improved. Anyone have some specific pointers on what needs to be fixed? Any ideas on how?

I'd say maybe just spend a little (and I stress little) more time on them. Your stories are some of my favorites, and particularly because of the quality of writing, good grammar, pace, etc. Like others have said, would just love to see more!