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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by liliwinnt6 » Wed Feb 21, 2018 8:49 pm

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by australopith » Sat Feb 24, 2018 2:23 am

LongTimeLurker wrote:A new scenario: A Night at the Opera (co-written with Epitaph)
I think I'm in love with the Stage Manager, and I don't care who knows it... :lovestruck:

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by Epitaph » Sat Feb 24, 2018 4:54 am

australopith wrote:
LongTimeLurker wrote:A new scenario: A Night at the Opera (co-written with Epitaph)
I think I'm in love with the Stage Manager, and I don't care who knows it... :lovestruck:
She's incredible :D

Both of her endings are gold, LongTimeLurker!

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by australopith » Sat Feb 24, 2018 5:48 am

Epitaph wrote:Both of her endings are gold, LongTimeLurker!
I swear I'll fix her, dammit, now that I've won her over. :lovestruck: And take her home where she will be the snarky perfectionist I simply need managing my life–when we're not busy having amazing fun, and when she's not working her new job at a real theatre.

She'll still suspect I'm secretly a robot, and will be annoyed to know she's one... having lived her entire life as a sleeper, she'll have no idea how to program herself, which since she's a perfectionist will bug her without cease. :D

(Hmm, it may bug her that IRL I've already got a girlfriend. Gulp.)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by Epitaph » Sat Feb 24, 2018 5:55 am

australopith wrote:
Epitaph wrote:Both of her endings are gold, LongTimeLurker!
I swear I'll fix her, dammit, now that I've won her over. :lovestruck: And take her home where she will be the snarky perfectionist I simply need managing my life–when we're not busy having amazing fun, and when she's not working her new job at a real theatre.

She'll still suspect I'm secretly a robot, and will be annoyed to know she's one... having lived her entire life as a sleeper, she'll have no idea how to program herself, which since she's a perfectionist will bug her without cease. :D

(Hmm, it may bug her that IRL I've already got a girlfriend. Gulp.)
Dammit. This has to be written into a full-sized story. :thumbsup:

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Sat Feb 24, 2018 8:18 am

Thanks for the kind words everyone!

Epitaph and australopith, I'm glad you liked the Stage Manager. She almost was cut from the story!
liliwinnt6 wrote:i guess i found something not right for the "Girl Next Door" scenario

if you took the core just from Amber, how do you end up at this line:
"You pry the cores from the two defunct sex-droids and exit the scenario chamber."
I might be referring to the powered-down mom-bot? Link me to the section.

Also, I still do not know how to track things like how many cores you're carrying, so this is all fairly arbitrary. :)
liliwinnt6 wrote:Error saving story: The Witch and the Warrior
Too many branches
Unit Boris cannot continue
Overheat detected!
Taking a break is required
Boris will now take a break ...
System cooling down ...
After that one and this opera, I plan on making the next one a touch simpler :)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by australopith » Sat Feb 24, 2018 11:57 am

Epitaph wrote:
australopith wrote:
Epitaph wrote:Both of her endings are gold, LongTimeLurker!
I swear I'll fix her, dammit, now that I've won her over. :lovestruck: And take her home where she will be the snarky perfectionist I simply need managing my life–when we're not busy having amazing fun, and when she's not working her new job at a real theatre.

She'll still suspect I'm secretly a robot, and will be annoyed to know she's one... having lived her entire life as a sleeper, she'll have no idea how to program herself, which since she's a perfectionist will bug her without cease. :D

(Hmm, it may bug her that IRL I've already got a girlfriend. Gulp.)
Dammit. This has to be written into a full-sized story. :thumbsup:
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by KinoLangDanzel » Sun Feb 25, 2018 1:49 am

I really liked the Scenario Chamber story, the ability to choose your own path is something that I've enjoyed greatly. Is there a way to make suggestions for a new chamber, or maybe a new choice on some of the gynoids?
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Post by LongTimeLurker » Sun Feb 25, 2018 9:07 am

KinoLangDanzel wrote:I really liked the Scenario Chamber story, the ability to choose your own path is something that I've enjoyed greatly. Is there a way to make suggestions for a new chamber, or maybe a new choice on some of the gynoids?
Thanks! You can post suggestions in this thread or on the suggestions wiki page.

Currently made suggestions are:
* Robot apocalypse
* Devil & Angel
* Alien vs Huntress

If you want to suggest a new choice within an existing story, just include a link to the page.

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by liliwinnt6 » Sun Feb 25, 2018 2:03 pm

http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=F ... _Door/0001
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Give her a hand with something else
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Keep going
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Yes, here
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Back off
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Defuse
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Stay with Amber’s mom
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Kiss her
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Continue
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Sorry Amber, your mom’s the one I want!
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Don’t be careful
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Collect the cores and leave
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Disentangling yourself from the headless droid, you open it up and extract her core, repeat the process with her shut-down daughter, then leave the scenario chamber.

excuse me, the daughter was shut down in this storyline?
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Post by DukeNukem 2417 » Sun Feb 25, 2018 2:20 pm

LongTimeLurker wrote:
KinoLangDanzel wrote:I really liked the Scenario Chamber story, the ability to choose your own path is something that I've enjoyed greatly. Is there a way to make suggestions for a new chamber, or maybe a new choice on some of the gynoids?
Thanks! You can post suggestions in this thread or on the suggestions wiki page.

Currently made suggestions are:
* Robot apocalypse
* Devil & Angel
* Alien vs Huntress

If you want to suggest a new choice within an existing story, just include a link to the page.
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Mon Feb 26, 2018 12:16 am

liliwinnt6 wrote:http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=F ... _Door/0001
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excuse me, the daughter was shut down in this storyline?
Yeah, at the "Sorry Amber, your mom’s the one I want!" step - Amber tries to storm off to her room but shuts down before she even gets out of the kitchen. I probably could be more explicit :)
DukeNukem 2417 wrote:Superheroines. Tight costumes + most common superpower ( :mrgreen: ) + robots = :rockon:
I'll add "Superheroes" to the list, but what is the most common superpower? Super-strength?

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Post by LongTimeLurker » Mon Feb 26, 2018 12:16 am

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Post by Extyr » Mon Feb 26, 2018 12:38 am

LongTimeLurker wrote: I'll add "Superheroes" to the list, but what is the most common superpower? Super-strength?
Most common superpower is tvtrope parlance for big boobs.

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by Mixgull » Tue Mar 06, 2018 6:26 pm

Cowgirl scenario? Maybe?

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Post by madx1 » Wed Mar 07, 2018 7:26 pm

Uh, I think I found a typo,
FYOP/Scenario Chamber/Girl Next Door/0042

“I need seven cores to unlock the main door,” you state plainly. “Would you be able to assist me?”

It's supposed to be six right?

Also a suggestion,

Go Downstairs
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[] Leave
[] Take her core
[] See if heavy petting wakes her up
[] See if a kiss wakes her up
[] Lets get her fixed up shall we?

Kinda want to be able to take Amber's mom with us too ;)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by Epitaph » Thu Mar 08, 2018 12:32 am

madx1 wrote:Kinda want to be able to take Amber's mom with us too ;)
Best of all possible worlds is that we just don't leave and have them all to have fun with.

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by KinoLangDanzel » Thu Mar 08, 2018 8:11 am

Maybe we can add a Monster Girl scenario. Similar to those FreakWorld stories I read on FW, there could be a scenario chamber with humanoid gynoids with animal characteristics. Maybe robots like a snake-girl fembot or the classic cat-girl robot would be nice.
LongTimeLurker wrote:
liliwinnt6 wrote:http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=F ... _Door/0001
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excuse me, the daughter was shut down in this storyline?
Yeah, at the "Sorry Amber, your mom’s the one I want!" step - Amber tries to storm off to her room but shuts down before she even gets out of the kitchen. I probably could be more explicit :)
DukeNukem 2417 wrote:Superheroines. Tight costumes + most common superpower ( :mrgreen: ) + robots = :rockon:
I'll add "Superheroes" to the list, but what is the most common superpower? Super-strength?
Some common superpowers include laser eyes, breath weapon (either freezing or extremely violent winds), flight, invisibility, telekinesis, and, of course, super strength. Take your pick or add more. I can imagine some really nice gynoid destruction when their 'powers' go.... awry.
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by australopith » Thu Mar 08, 2018 4:25 pm

Epitaph wrote:
madx1 wrote:Kinda want to be able to take Amber's mom with us too ;)
Best of all possible worlds is that we just don't leave and have them all to have fun with.
Nah–I'd really like an option to get out with that snarky stage manager. She and I are serious–you don't even know. :)

(And Pamina really suffered–in an alternate world, I'd like to get her out and care for her. Damn, these characters are too likable.)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Mon Mar 12, 2018 12:22 am

Mixgull wrote:Cowgirl scenario? Maybe?
Do you mean a wild west scenario, a more contemporary farm-girl or this sort of cow girl? :)
madx1 wrote:Uh, I think I found a typo,
FYOP/Scenario Chamber/Girl Next Door/0042

“I need seven cores to unlock the main door,” you state plainly. “Would you be able to assist me?”

It's supposed to be six right?

Also a suggestion: Kinda want to be able to take Amber's mom with us too ;)
Six sounds correct. I'll fix the typo and add in a bit of mom-bot repair.
KinoLangDanzel wrote:Maybe we can add a Monster Girl scenario. Similar to those FreakWorld stories I read on FW, there could be a scenario chamber with humanoid gynoids with animal characteristics. Maybe robots like a snake-girl fembot or the classic cat-girl robot would be nice.
I loved FreakWorld, and definitely have a soft spot for monster girls :lovestruck:. I'll try to sprinkle some in where appropriate (see below).
KinoLangDanzel wrote:Some common superpowers include laser eyes, breath weapon (either freezing or extremely violent winds), flight, invisibility, telekinesis, and, of course, super strength. Take your pick or add more. I can imagine some really nice gynoid destruction when their 'powers' go.... awry.
The next chamber I'm doing is SuperHeroes, and of course it's spiraling out of control - but I did manage to fit in a cat girl and an "energy-beam" hero / villain.
australopith wrote:Nah–I'd really like an option to get out with that snarky stage manager. She and I are serious–you don't even know. :)
I am terrified at the prospect of writing a separate, "And you run off [insert robot(s) here]" because that gets messy very, very quickly... but I am of course happy to crowd-source these possibilities ;)
If you just want a "fix the stage manager and send her to the nebulous 'main entrance'", that's much easier.

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Post by Mixgull » Wed Mar 14, 2018 6:32 pm

Yeah, western... I wouldn't mind though (.¿.)

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Superheroes + TWINE

Post by LongTimeLurker » Sat Aug 11, 2018 8:11 am

Thanks to a lot of help from FaceoffFembot and RobotMan, I've ported Scenario Chamber over to Twine.

Download it from the wiki here.

Now the game can track which cores you've added and should allow me to make more complicated chambers. Note that even though it's now possible to collect 12(?) cores, I still don't have the "Exit" written :P

I've also added a new "Superhero" chamber (with plans to expand on it later).

I also fielded a request to add an option with Stacy the Stage Manager in "A Night at the Opera".

I've gotten several PM suggestions, this is what we have so far:

* Camping / Horror (likely to be the next one)
* Robot Apocalypse
* Devil & Angel
* Alien / Alien Hunter
* Office
* Western
* Beach Party
* Giant Mecha
* Mansion (maids!)
* Gladiator
* Hot Springs
* Classroom
* Spies (a FaceoffFembot story?)

And if you find bugs, please report them here or send me a PM. Thanks!
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP - Now with Twine

Post by Robotman » Sat Aug 11, 2018 8:18 am

Very fun, and excellent use of Twine! :applause:

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP - Now with Twine

Post by Silkscreen » Sat Aug 11, 2018 11:26 am

Content-wise not exactly my cup of tea, but great work! :party:

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