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Story find

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Re: Story find

Post by DollSpace » Sat Oct 27, 2012 11:55 am

Not bad stories at all, and a lot of room for character development! Good find, and thanks for sharing it with us!

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Post by Gorgo » Sat Oct 27, 2012 12:45 pm

Don't particularly care too much for stories that harp on society-wide simophobia, but that's me.
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Post by Thornevald » Sat Oct 27, 2012 12:45 pm

no one know storys aboutb sleepers?

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Post by tectile » Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:27 am

DollSpace wrote:Not bad stories at all, and a lot of room for character development! Good find, and thanks for sharing it with us!
Your welcome DS, Since I can't write and my artistic talent is limited to stick figures, I do what I can to contribute to the community :)

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Post by Cecilauthor » Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:24 pm

While the premise is very interesting, and probable in many respects, the ending is highly unlikely. If he's such a successful detective, then he must be able to get warrants. (Even if he is unpopular) All he has to do is get a warrant to search Zino's CPU on the basis that she was the last 'person' to see the victim alive. Based on the premise, her CPU would contain a memory of her committing the roboticide, and planting the evidence. Case closed. A seasoned investigator with so many years of experience wouldn't be thwarted so easily.

Then he can raid the evidence locker and force her to perform. Yay.

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Post by Cecilauthor » Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:45 pm

While the murder should not be difficult for a veteran detective to prove; (see above) it suuuuuuure is fun to read.

These robots don't need to rebel, birth-rates would plummet! Maybe the government can set up baby factories. Probably run by robots.

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